Comment from mermaids

Excellent

I like this conversation between the wave and the wind, it shows them as live characters. You have vivid imagery here and this is a creative and unique poem that holds the reader's interest.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018

Thanks again for your wonderful review and time Elaine (Metmaid)
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

wind and wave are still good friends after all of those years. I love this look at the world from the elements that are so powerful and necessary to keep changing our terrain and sometimes terrorize us. yours, diana

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018

Thanks again for your wonderful review and time Art.
Ricky....

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Ha ha ha ha ha ....I wrote a novel...and left my character flying through the air for weeks trying to decide what to do with her..it wrecked havoc on her skin and hair was a total mess.
Well penned Ricky . I'm still chuckling
God bless

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018

Just edited and completed.
Ricky...
And Thanks!
Funny!!!