Rust Colored Leaves
Transitions of the Seasons15 total reviews
Comment from karenina
A grand tribute to the cycle of the seasons...each playing its part in advancing new sprouts of life unseen but ever present...like blessings just out of sight but gracing us every day.
Karenina
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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A grand tribute to the cycle of the seasons...each playing its part in advancing new sprouts of life unseen but ever present...like blessings just out of sight but gracing us every day.
Karenina
Comment Written 23-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Thank you karenina for this nice review. Much appreciated
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderful poem "There's only one reason Robins can feed
Because life in winter in winter sprouted from seed"
This is a great ending to an excellent poem very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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What a wonderful poem "There's only one reason Robins can feed
Because life in winter in winter sprouted from seed"
This is a great ending to an excellent poem very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 23-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Thank you kahpot for this nice review Much appreciated
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello Pamusart, you capture the rhythm of life through the changing seasons very effectively, and really punch it home at the end. It is counterintuitive to associate winter with rebirth but that is what you do in your end lines, pointing out the fallacy in the winter months being perceived as dormant and dead. I don't do technical reviews, I'm not a technician, mine are mostly emotive and content-driven for what that's worth, but this did read nicely and I enjoyed the journey, cheers, Ana.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Hello Pamusart, you capture the rhythm of life through the changing seasons very effectively, and really punch it home at the end. It is counterintuitive to associate winter with rebirth but that is what you do in your end lines, pointing out the fallacy in the winter months being perceived as dormant and dead. I don't do technical reviews, I'm not a technician, mine are mostly emotive and content-driven for what that's worth, but this did read nicely and I enjoyed the journey, cheers, Ana.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Thank you Ana. You never mentioned not doing technical reviews before. Why now? Just curious. This is a nice review
Comment from Ricky1024
Hi Pam.
This is one of your best.
Ran out of 'Axes very worthy though.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content and Objective Content were perfect.
Ricky.....
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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Hi Pam.
This is one of your best.
Ran out of 'Axes very worthy though.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content and Objective Content were perfect.
Ricky.....
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Comment Written 23-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Hi Ricky 1024. I will happily take the virtual six stars. Thanks also for the great review
Comment from meeshu
what an enjoyable nature poem in your now famous power stanza form. our Robins eat apples after they hit the ground in late fall. good one, Pam..........meeshu
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what an enjoyable nature poem in your now famous power stanza form. our Robins eat apples after they hit the ground in late fall. good one, Pam..........meeshu
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Comment Written 23-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Yes meeshu the article I read said that if they stay into winter, they can eat fresh or frozen apples. Thanks for the excellent review
