Rust Colored Leaves
Transitions of the Seasons15 total reviews
Comment from RGstar
Without me goin on with superlatives, I will just say, this is beautifully written, and the reasons self explanatory.
My six stars.
Well done.
Best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Without me goin on with superlatives, I will just say, this is beautifully written, and the reasons self explanatory.
My six stars.
Well done.
Best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much RGstar for the extra star. It made my day. Thank you for the wonderful review
Comment from Artasylum
Oh girl... you are so knowledgable about so many things... I enjoy your posts and love that you share your vastness with us kiddo. thanks as always... you are so goo. yours, diana
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Oh girl... you are so knowledgable about so many things... I enjoy your posts and love that you share your vastness with us kiddo. thanks as always... you are so goo. yours, diana
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Wow. This review made me smile, Diana. Thanks for the great review
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Very descriptive. The changing leaves, from green to multi-colored, are an enjoyable sight to behold. Good imagery and rhyme used throughout the poem.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Very descriptive. The changing leaves, from green to multi-colored, are an enjoyable sight to behold. Good imagery and rhyme used throughout the poem.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Thank you Brett for a great review. Much appreciated
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Pam what a beautiful Back To Nature poem is what I call this piece. What always amazes me about leaves is that I've only pictured leaves to be green until the fall comes and they turn various shades of gold Brown and in between and this poem takes me to another dimension of color which is rust. Beautiful poem accompanied by an appropriate picture.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Pam what a beautiful Back To Nature poem is what I call this piece. What always amazes me about leaves is that I've only pictured leaves to be green until the fall comes and they turn various shades of gold Brown and in between and this poem takes me to another dimension of color which is rust. Beautiful poem accompanied by an appropriate picture.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Thank you Mary for your wonderful review
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My pleasure, are so insightful
Comment from jenintorre
Thank you for the journey through the seasons in your lovely descriptive poem. What lovely imagery and a well chosen illustration to enhance it. Best wishes. Jen
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Thank you for the journey through the seasons in your lovely descriptive poem. What lovely imagery and a well chosen illustration to enhance it. Best wishes. Jen
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Hi Jen. Arrn?t You on vacation? Hope you are having a great time. Thanks for the excellent review
Comment from lyenochka
What a love about this poem is the complete picture it gives me. It's not just about the season or moment that we observe now, but even when we can't see it, future life is there now. As you said :
"But what we can't see is new life below
that's sprouting and spurting loudly, you know "
It would be best to see all of life like that.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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What a love about this poem is the complete picture it gives me. It's not just about the season or moment that we observe now, but even when we can't see it, future life is there now. As you said :
"But what we can't see is new life below
that's sprouting and spurting loudly, you know "
It would be best to see all of life like that.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Thank you lyenochka for the wonderful review
Comment from BeasPeas
Good rhyming in this poem of autumn to winter and into spring. Good imagery and illustrated beautifully with the delightful robin. Last stanza is especially well done. Marilyn
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Good rhyming in this poem of autumn to winter and into spring. Good imagery and illustrated beautifully with the delightful robin. Last stanza is especially well done. Marilyn
Comment Written 23-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Thank you Marilyn for your kind words and nice review
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Pamusart
Love how you with you poetic words describe the change of the seasons from fall fall, to winter then bring in the beauty of spring especially when the robins come and still find snow on the ground (yes here in Vermont they decide to come)
Gert
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Hello Pamusart
Love how you with you poetic words describe the change of the seasons from fall fall, to winter then bring in the beauty of spring especially when the robins come and still find snow on the ground (yes here in Vermont they decide to come)
Gert
Comment Written 23-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Thank you Gert for this great review and for the kind words
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You are welcome Pamusart
Gert
Comment from Pantygynt
I remember studying a bird's digestive system at school years ago. It was so simple in one end and out the othe with very few kinks and corners like ours. I wonder if that is why they can cope with such a varied diet. They seem to be able to cope with things that are poisonous to us.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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I remember studying a bird's digestive system at school years ago. It was so simple in one end and out the othe with very few kinks and corners like ours. I wonder if that is why they can cope with such a varied diet. They seem to be able to cope with things that are poisonous to us.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Hi Jim. Thanks for the kind words and excellent review
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the transition of seasons, I am sitting here freezing of cold, although I have hope that we will soon have longer and warmer days to enjoy.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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A very well-written poem about the transition of seasons, I am sitting here freezing of cold, although I have hope that we will soon have longer and warmer days to enjoy.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Thank you Sandra for this nice review
