Comment from meeshu

Excellent

this is a very positive impactful writing. trust yourself is my take away from this piece. strong message and well versed poem, Pbomar..............meeshu

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018

Thanks for reading, Meeshu.

Phillip

Comment from pome lover

Excellent

I am glad that you have overcome a fear and feel - new, and much relieved, I would guess.
I'm unclear about your poem, though - maybe you can enlighten me.
"the thoughts only comes from someone sought." I don't get that.
Also, if I may, in line 6, it should be On account of, and line 7, "when one's metal is tested."
I think your message is clear - face your fears. right? that's a very good message.
Katharine - pome lover

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018

Thanks for reading, Kathy. I kinda hoped you could get something out for yourself. I was not trying to convert you. But if you didn't understand it, I was just trying to write a poem, which I can't do well.

Phillip

reply by pome lover on 23-Jun-2018

no, no. I got something out of it - my last line said I thought your message was clear and that it was a very good message.
I just didn't get the first part and was hoping you'd explain. I didn't think you were trying to convert me.

reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018

I'm sorry. Thanks for reading, Pome Lover.

Phillip

Comment from Brigitte Elko

Exceptional

Wow! You have come a long way with your creative voice. I could not find a flaw in this magnificent thought provoking poetry. It has a beginning, middle, and end. This worthy of more praise than I give. Well done my friend. It should have been in a contest for it has merit.

Have a great weekend.
Blessings,
Brigitte

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018

Thanks, Brigitte.

Phillip

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Very good poem pbomar1115
I like how you told us in your rhyming poem
that fear is in you mind and the only way to get rid of fear is to conquer you dreaded fear by only things that fear you not.
Gert

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018

Thanks for reading, Gert.

Phillip

Comment from Old Soldier

Excellent

I like it but do you think crazy people think their crazy? They pass there mental test every day. So, if you do fail the test you won't know. So don't be afraid. Hell, I hear voice all the time. I just don't answer back:) Every day is a test my man, everyday.
Nice work. Thanks for sharing

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 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018

Thanks for reading, Old Soldier.

Phillip

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks need of living fearless, that we should test to overcome fear and take chance of living for fear in heart cannot help struggling for living; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018

Thanks for reading, Alcreateor.

Phillip