Comment from catch22

Excellent

Hi Craig, I liked the use of the chosen word in the poem, and the limerick meter read well for me. I tend to think the subject matter should be more risqué for these forms of poems. Other than that, it's another fine addition to your book.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018

It wouldn't be hard to produce a risque poem about the effects of cold weather, Pam!

Many thanks,
Craig

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Great limerick, Craig. Good job with its style. Your lines flow smoothly with a great message. Who wouldn't like staying home from work because of the cold. I like the line:
'for the wind dries my skin like old leather. Your picture is a great pairing with your well chosen words. Thanks for sharing Jan

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018

Thanks very much for the lovely comments, Jan. I'm glad you enjoyed :) Craig

Comment from Scarbrems

Excellent

Well, thanks Craig, but I think Hubby might not be keen on me suddenly leaving for Australia. Nice little limerick, great word. I always hiemate in Sark, but wouldn't mind hiemating somewhere warmer, lol.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018

Well that counts out Australia, at least for the next couple of months! Maybe hubby wouldn't mind if you made sure he had a good supply of TV dinners? Many thanks, Emma :)

Comment from bichonfrisegirl

Excellent

Thanks for teaching us another word, Craig. Your limerick is very well done. I especially like your concluding line ... "if you like, we could stay home together". ~~ Connie

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 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018

Thanks so much, Connie. I'm very grateful for your continued support in reading and reviewing :) Craig

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written limerick about winter. It hit me in the right spot as we are having summer here and it has been extremely hot! Very good words and well written my friend! Blessings, Teri

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 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018

Thanks so much, Teri, for the lovely comments. You are most welcome to send some of that heat this way! Cheers, Craig