Who Am I?
The construction of a life.12 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Good reflective poem in rhyming couplets, Phillip. We all have these thoughts of what might have been if we had more control over our lives and could choose different aspects of life.
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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018
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Good reflective poem in rhyming couplets, Phillip. We all have these thoughts of what might have been if we had more control over our lives and could choose different aspects of life.
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Comment Written 21-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018
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Thanks for reading, Lyenochka.
Phillip
Comment from BermyBye50
Well done. You have penned a intriguing poem that captured my attention from start to end. It has great flow and reads well. Its simple and very personal.
Thank you for sharing
Eugene
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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018
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Well done. You have penned a intriguing poem that captured my attention from start to end. It has great flow and reads well. Its simple and very personal.
Thank you for sharing
Eugene
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Comment Written 21-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018
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Thanks for reading, Bermy.
Phillip
