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Comment from RFL
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Hi Jean. This is a very moving poem. 'I can feel it.' One suggestion I would make is to change line 6 to, "I shed a tear," so that works with "it", which is singular. Best to you,
Rona (now RFL)

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018

reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
    Thanks for your review
Comment from Brigitte Elko
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This is a sad tale in poetic form. Well written and a story complete with a beginning, middle, and end. Very well penned. The image is startling and captured my attention immediately.

Blessings,
Brigitte

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2018

reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018
    Thank you
Comment from Ricky1024
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This is a well written poem with great theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content and Objective Content were excellent and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this and God Bless the Queen.
Dr Ricky 1024.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2018

reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018
    Thank you