Heal my Heart Lord!
Thank you Linda for the use of your great work.18 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
Not only was the photo you choose to go with your poem a perfect match
Your word touched my heart I can relate to a certain point just how the mother and children
Feel
This will be bedridden into their minds for life.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
Not only was the photo you choose to go with your poem a perfect match
Your word touched my heart I can relate to a certain point just how the mother and children
Feel
This will be bedridden into their minds for life.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
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You are so right my friend. When something is done to a child they do remember it. Thanks for the great review and very lovely comments! love, Teri
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Good morning to you
You're very welcome have a nice week end
Cookie
Comment from Phillip C Kuhn
At first it almost reads as a prayer for help with daily life struggles, but after reading your notes you can see and understand how it was pointed to something more specific ð???ð??»ð???ð??»
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
At first it almost reads as a prayer for help with daily life struggles, but after reading your notes you can see and understand how it was pointed to something more specific ð???ð??»ð???ð??»
Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Thank you for the lovely review and nice comments! Blessings, Teri
Comment from fm wright
Your words say a lot and knowing that God answers when all we can do is cry out in anguish comes out so wonderfully in your poem. Thanks for writing it and sharing it.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
Your words say a lot and knowing that God answers when all we can do is cry out in anguish comes out so wonderfully in your poem. Thanks for writing it and sharing it.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Thank you for the lovely review and very nice comments! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Wow! What a beautiful tribute to those pitiful children. I have been disturbed by their images and cries too. I think this is a well-written five lines of poetry. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
Wow! What a beautiful tribute to those pitiful children. I have been disturbed by their images and cries too. I think this is a well-written five lines of poetry. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Thank you Cindy for the lovely review and very nice comments! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written five-line poem. I am sure many parents will not do something that can possibly cause their children took away from them when they act illegally.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
A very well-written five-line poem. I am sure many parents will not do something that can possibly cause their children took away from them when they act illegally.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Thank you for the very lovely review and nice comments! Blessings, Teri
Comment from dovemarie
Dear Teri, A lot said in a simple, 5-line poem. I have been calling out to Jesus, and He's finally answering some of my prayers (a job prospect, publication of poems, etc.) I wrote a poem called Broken Heart on Fan Story just the other day! Seems as if we're on the same wavelength again! Love, Donna
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
Dear Teri, A lot said in a simple, 5-line poem. I have been calling out to Jesus, and He's finally answering some of my prayers (a job prospect, publication of poems, etc.) I wrote a poem called Broken Heart on Fan Story just the other day! Seems as if we're on the same wavelength again! Love, Donna
Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much Donna for the great review and very nice comments. I think we are on the same wavelength at times. love you my friend! Teri
Comment from royowen
I think Trump has surpassed whatever he's done before, this is an act of inhumanity. You've done a great job with this poem Teri. Beautiful written plus a wonderful prayer, good luck,blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
I think Trump has surpassed whatever he's done before, this is an act of inhumanity. You've done a great job with this poem Teri. Beautiful written plus a wonderful prayer, good luck,blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much my friend. I am thankful that I am not led by my mind and pen at times. I am thankful that the Holy Spirit dwells within us! It is so wrong that is going on. These poor families and children make me so sad. I am thankful I live where I do and that God is real and on the throne! Blessings, Teri
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Me too Teri,
Comment from friartuck
Far too few people see, or want to see the so obvious answer to our current dilemma. You've stated it very well in a fine poem! It's too bad, but current events do tend to prove the results of despising and rejecting Him. Thanks for sharing that!
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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
Far too few people see, or want to see the so obvious answer to our current dilemma. You've stated it very well in a fine poem! It's too bad, but current events do tend to prove the results of despising and rejecting Him. Thanks for sharing that!
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Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Thank you for the very good review and very nice comments! May God bless you! Teri