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Yoga a religion or a Discipline.

A short essay on understanding Yoga

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Comment from Kathy Franklin
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I found the exploration of the subject in this essay interesting. There is a little struggle with the English language, but not overly significant being mainly the inappropriate capitalization of words that are not proper nouns. It is overall a good writing that uses an original source in support of the idea presented.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
    No struggle at all with the English language; published two Novels and scores of papers. Use of capital letters in the middle of sentence have a purpose, but my writing style often differs with many American English writers of modern kinds. Thanks for your comment. I will go back and see if if there is a cause to change anything.
reply by Kathy Franklin on 22-Jun-2018
    Cheers! I hope my comments did not offend you.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
    No I don't get offended or euphoric easily because of number of stars awarded by the reviewers and by the comments I receive. I appreciate the work they undertake and I go back and review my work to see if it can be improved. Thanks.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
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Hello, I do yoga. I am not an exercise sort of person, but Yoga suits me, the stretching keeps me supple and I enjoy the reflective moments it offers. You have written this commentary with a lot of literary skill. I noticed no errors and found this work interesting and enlightening, cheers, Ana.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
    I am glad you liked the essay. I am a published writer and my Novel, SAMSARA-A COMPLETE CIRCLE is published by Lulu and will be available this month. Yes, Yoga will protect you from getting many problems of body and mine. I have been doing since I was 9 years young. Do you do meditation with it? Read my other works and poems in my portfolio here. Good luck with your yoga. Peace and tranquility may fill your days.
reply by Alexander Vasa on 19-Jun-2018
    Yes, I do meditate, I find it helps me focus and stay peaceful and calm. I would recommend yoga to everyone. I didn't start as early as you though, I was in my 20's.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
    Hi Anna. I am also not regular in my exercise routine but do the meditation more frequently. I was born and raised in India and it was a part of routine since childhood. Do you do the 'Pranayam' breathing exercise? Learn this simple exercise it will improve intake of Oxygen by at least 33 percent which is beneficial to brain health. Good luck and thanks for the reply.