Cabery
my home town38 total reviews
Comment from kiwigirl2821
This is a trippy write. I think sometimes it is hard to revisit places and things that left us feeling less than we are now. I often wonder if it's better to marshal on than to take a tour down memory lane. You have a profound way to leave a reader wondering. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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This is a trippy write. I think sometimes it is hard to revisit places and things that left us feeling less than we are now. I often wonder if it's better to marshal on than to take a tour down memory lane. You have a profound way to leave a reader wondering. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Deborah.
Comment from Claire Hardin
This is a truly exquisite poem that seems so simple, but is so complex at the same time. The artwork complements the piece well, also. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of poetry!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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This is a truly exquisite poem that seems so simple, but is so complex at the same time. The artwork complements the piece well, also. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of poetry!
Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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No, I thank you.
Comment from Urial
Hi Victor,
This is a fine free verse poem. The nice pace and rhythm to the poem. Your iambic meter is good. Nice job.
Uriel
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Hi Victor,
This is a fine free verse poem. The nice pace and rhythm to the poem. Your iambic meter is good. Nice job.
Uriel
Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Doug. I love the picture of the dog. Is his name Dougie? LOL And Im am fathering that he is or was your pet. Your poem sort of rambles incoharantly at times but all is well in balance.
Bravo, Bob
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Hi, Doug. I love the picture of the dog. Is his name Dougie? LOL And Im am fathering that he is or was your pet. Your poem sort of rambles incoharantly at times but all is well in balance.
Bravo, Bob
Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Thank you.
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: ) Bob
Comment from estory
I really enjoyed the fragmented format of this, the fractured view of moments, which seem to flash around us and leave us whirling around in circles wondering where we are. The fragments of sentences give us this abstract expressionist view of language, of ideas, half formed, of moments, half lived. Very interesting construction, very imaginative, very creative. Thinking outside the box, and tying these constructions to the theme puts them on another level. estory
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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I really enjoyed the fragmented format of this, the fractured view of moments, which seem to flash around us and leave us whirling around in circles wondering where we are. The fragments of sentences give us this abstract expressionist view of language, of ideas, half formed, of moments, half lived. Very interesting construction, very imaginative, very creative. Thinking outside the box, and tying these constructions to the theme puts them on another level. estory
Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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This was a very gracious and insightful review. I deeply appreciate it. Thank you.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
There is something really cool about this. Is that a Boston terrier in the pic? I REALLY liked this in so many ways, very modern fresh but loaded with feeling so a six from me well done kindest regards Meia x
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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There is something really cool about this. Is that a Boston terrier in the pic? I REALLY liked this in so many ways, very modern fresh but loaded with feeling so a six from me well done kindest regards Meia x
Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Meia, thank you so much.
Comment from meeshu
I appreciate nonsense poetry as much as the next guy, but this isn't giving me enough to work with. someone with a drinking problem, I think. I need a little meat with all the potatoes. one man's opinion, Victor..........meeshu
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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I appreciate nonsense poetry as much as the next guy, but this isn't giving me enough to work with. someone with a drinking problem, I think. I need a little meat with all the potatoes. one man's opinion, Victor..........meeshu
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Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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No problem. Thank you.
Comment from William Ross
A good and well written free verse on this small town you live n, 800 is small, I thought mine was small at 1500. Thanks for the share and have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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A good and well written free verse on this small town you live n, 800 is small, I thought mine was small at 1500. Thanks for the share and have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem going down memory lane until getting back to the hometown where life's journey originally begins all the things we hold dear to our hearts start at home.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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A very well-written poem going down memory lane until getting back to the hometown where life's journey originally begins all the things we hold dear to our hearts start at home.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Yup. Thank you.
Comment from Air Spirit
Well, you certainly write in an intriguing manner --- I love the dialogue, conversation you seem to be having... but it is fleeting and hard to ascertain what you really want to say... I love the words, verbiage, intrigue and unique and individual style of putting together creative thoughts, it just saddens me that I can't follow it through to really ascertain what is in your heart or mind... but perhaps, that is what the intent is... just to entertain, intrigue, and leave the reader inquisitive and wanting more! If so, you succeeded! Job well done!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Well, you certainly write in an intriguing manner --- I love the dialogue, conversation you seem to be having... but it is fleeting and hard to ascertain what you really want to say... I love the words, verbiage, intrigue and unique and individual style of putting together creative thoughts, it just saddens me that I can't follow it through to really ascertain what is in your heart or mind... but perhaps, that is what the intent is... just to entertain, intrigue, and leave the reader inquisitive and wanting more! If so, you succeeded! Job well done!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Smiling. How does one describe puberty? Pain, joy, clueless, and yes, so were they-but hey, we all were one eventually. Just a sense of community with sadness.
