Portrait
short poem contest7 total reviews
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
This is so special.
You have captured the image and its se rets so perfectly.
The eyes truly are the windows to the soul it seems.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018
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This is so special.
You have captured the image and its se rets so perfectly.
The eyes truly are the windows to the soul it seems.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018
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Thank for your review
Comment from Xia Thornwood
Even with such a short poem, you were able to express a lot. I like what you did with it, and the picture fits quite well. Good imagery. I have no critique.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Even with such a short poem, you were able to express a lot. I like what you did with it, and the picture fits quite well. Good imagery. I have no critique.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Thank you
Comment from meeshu
a very good five-liner, Magic. the photograph helps the whole package along. some well chosen language as well............meeshu
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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a very good five-liner, Magic. the photograph helps the whole package along. some well chosen language as well............meeshu
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There's sadness in these words and some faces retain that sadness throughout their lives and never seem to lighten up. Life can get you down if you let it, the secret is to see the silver lining in everything, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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There's sadness in these words and some faces retain that sadness throughout their lives and never seem to lighten up. Life can get you down if you let it, the secret is to see the silver lining in everything, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Thank you for your review
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello Magic Dragon, such a pretty poem when you open this window, the picture is lovely and sets just the right tone. I noticed no errors and think it is a very strong entry for the 'five line poem' contest and best of luck.
Your word choices are excellent and we see that there is a pain in the girl's eyes, something the painter sees and is able to capture.
I have no suggestion for improvement and thanks for sharing your poetry, Ana.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Hello Magic Dragon, such a pretty poem when you open this window, the picture is lovely and sets just the right tone. I noticed no errors and think it is a very strong entry for the 'five line poem' contest and best of luck.
Your word choices are excellent and we see that there is a pain in the girl's eyes, something the painter sees and is able to capture.
I have no suggestion for improvement and thanks for sharing your poetry, Ana.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Thank you for your review
Comment from Ash Bleu
Loved this piece. Short but yet compelling. It's almost as if I could see sad eyes upon reading it. An artist can always see through a person and capture it.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Loved this piece. Short but yet compelling. It's almost as if I could see sad eyes upon reading it. An artist can always see through a person and capture it.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Thank you for your review
Comment from Artasylum
Therein lies the problem... until we look deeply into another eyes we don't know the person nor do we know their intentions... Thanks so much Magic Dragon... yours, diana
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018
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Therein lies the problem... until we look deeply into another eyes we don't know the person nor do we know their intentions... Thanks so much Magic Dragon... yours, diana
Comment Written 17-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018
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Thank you
