Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks how happy, progressive, successful the poet has been, he raised a good family, only bereaved losing his only son, now happy with grandchildren; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018

THANKS AGAIN Al Creator for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024.

Comment from Rdfrdmom2

Excellent

Ricky1024:

It truly is criminal what the mortgage companies did to way too many
people - and who had to pay - certainly not the mortgage companies
to the extent they should have.
I am so sorry for the loss of your son - still his heart continues to beat
in someone else's chest.
thanks for sharing
jan

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018

Thanks from me and Jay to you!
Ricky....

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

This is an amazing story of love and loss, I like the way you continually bounce back from whatever "shit" comes your way, very well written and very well done****kahpot

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018

And thanks for your wonderful review and time kahpot.
Ricky...

Comment from Donka Kristeva

Excellent

Straight and out! Just as in an ordinary talk this poem tells as things really are. I slipped the "language" I thought could have been avoided. Good overall.

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018

Sorry but rarely do I use 'Power Word's unless I want the thought to have deeper meaning.
Thanks, Ricky...

Comment from Sherman541

Excellent

Just me, is very interesting and I find it very descriptive. I am glad that you realize that you are not Mister Loser - your life seems very full and grand kids are great. I am so sorry about your son, but at least you have always honored him and never forgotten him. Very nicely written. Sherman541

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018

Thanks Sherman.
The loss of a Son like Jason is devastating bug I try to make up for it by promoting Life.
Ricky....

reply by Sherman541 on 17-Jun-2018

You are welcome and I cannot imagine losing one of my daughters. God Bless

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

this is a cacophony of tragedy... so many lives go wrong and there is often no hope. You have Alex and most importantly you have yourself... God Bless. yours, diana

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018

And thanks for your wonderful review and time Artasylum.
Dr Ricky 1024