In a Private Jet
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Comment from Old Soldier
"Leaving on a jet plane, don't know if I'll be back again" ....come on join in .... " Leaving on a jet plane....Just having some fun. Thanks for sharing and keep writing and reading.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018
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"Leaving on a jet plane, don't know if I'll be back again" ....come on join in .... " Leaving on a jet plane....Just having some fun. Thanks for sharing and keep writing and reading.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, good poem, it has lovely imagery and the picture you've used is very appropriate for setting the tone of the poem. I think it is easy to have a prod at the rich, but you may not be aware that a lot of very rich people are also philanthropists and give a lot of money away. Just a thought, as I know a few.
Good word choices and nothing to fix, thanks for sharing your poetry, Ana.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018
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Hello, good poem, it has lovely imagery and the picture you've used is very appropriate for setting the tone of the poem. I think it is easy to have a prod at the rich, but you may not be aware that a lot of very rich people are also philanthropists and give a lot of money away. Just a thought, as I know a few.
Good word choices and nothing to fix, thanks for sharing your poetry, Ana.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018
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Thank you for your review and insight.
