Comment from apky

Excellent

I'm now confused about the two Matilda's. Up to now, I thought Granny's girlfriend's name is Marge. Are there two Matildas in the story?

Otherwise another excellent chapter, well written and left off at a cliffhanger. I can't wait to find out the mystery with Matilda.

Your friend Matilda(does Granny have a friend who is also a namesake?) is leaving today, I thought you might want to tell her bye before she goes

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018

I'm so glad to hear from you. I was getting really worried because you hadn't posted in a while.
Thank you so much for such a wonderful review and such encouraging words. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. That in itself means a lot to me.
I am sorry for all the confusion. Matilda and Granny are two different people. Only one Matilda in the story. Granny and Matilda know and dislike each other because of a situation when they were younger. Matilda tried to still Granny's hubby.
Marge is Matilda's friend. Maybe I should go back to the beginning and make that clearer. Write in more pieces showing they're different people? What do you think? You know I always value your opinion.
Thank you again for your kind review, glad you're alright, take care.

reply by apky on 18-Jun-2018

Ah, now I understand. No wonder Granny gave Matilda's name to the police! Wicked, wicked, Granny. She's still my kickass heroine. No you don't need to correct anything - my bad.

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

Oh dear, Granny is on a real rampage and getting a little careless. Now another is being looked at for the crime because she gave another name. Granny is both clever and demented. =} I saw no errors. Looking forward to next chapter.

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018

Thank you so much for a great review. Granny is a sly old bird that's for sure lol. Smart and very determined.
Thank you again for your great review and all of your support it means a lot to me, take care.

Comment from Marvin Calloway

Excellent

Another interesting chapter.
It's one of those 'Who do you root for?' stories. She's playing God, which
none of us should do, but we'd like to see her get a few more bad guys before getting arrested.
Well done.
Marv

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018

Thank you so much for your review and your wonderful praise. It's kind of difficult not to root for someone getting justice, despite their illegal means. Several of my books are this way. A former victim saving potential victims, getting justice or righting a wrong. Many times my readers will ask for them not to get caught.
Thank you again for such a lovely review and for all your support, it means so much to me, take care.
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Comment from royowen

Excellent

So, instead of suspecting Matilda, the police bring in Madeleine for questioning, Matilda realises she was a little careless concerning the camera. But the police couldn't pick up a clear shot of her. She have to watch herself here on int, who would suspect a helpless grandma, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018

Thank you so much for your kind review, and for catching my mistake. I met Matelda and not Madeline. Typed the second one a couple of times by mistake. It's fixed now.
Thank you again for your great review and all your support, take care.

reply by royowen on 15-Jun-2018

Ok,

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

I don't know why Joe took Madeline to the front door and why Granny said she got even. If you would post every day, I would follow it better. As it is, my old brain forgets what happened last time.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018

Thank you so much for your review I'm sorry your so confused. I have a feeling it's my fault, I used the names, Madeline and Matilda, referring to one person. It should've been Matilda the entire time. Sorry about that, It's fixed now.
Matilda is the who lost her grandson in the beginning, the one who had words with the nurse Liz. Joe took her because she looks like the lady on the camera, Granny gave her name at the ceremony. Granny said I finally got even because she tried to take Granny's hubby away.
I hope that made things clearer if not please let me know. There is no way I can post daily, I struggle making the 4-day deadline.
Thank you again for your review and all your support it means a lot to me. Again, I'm sorry for all the confusion I caused. The good side to all of this, It wasn't your brain at all.

reply by Phyllis Stewart on 15-Jun-2018

That helps a lot. Thanks. :)

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

'Evidence was well written with great theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content and Objective Content were excellent.
Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Dr Ricky 1024.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018

Thank you so much for your great review, and wonderful praise it means a lot to me, take care.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Misty sorry no sixes to give you
You certinley know how to make me to rush and see what you are going to say --
So I slowed down to a snail's pace.
I found this chapter very so well written and how clear it was to understand of what was taking place.
Please refresh my mind who is
Madeline Browning."
Gert

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018

Thank you so much for such a great review and wonderful words. Madeline is the lady in the beginning, the one who went to her Grandson's funeral. I probably confused you because I used the wrong name It should've been Brenning, not Browning. Thank you so much for catching that. and for all your support, friendship, it means a lot to me. Take care.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Misty, things are moving along nicely, and Granny seems to be active as ever. I wonder whether they will be able to catch her. I'm actually enjoying this story. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018

Thank you so much for your review I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Some of my readers don't want her caught, think that she should just move on. What would you like to see happen?
Thank you again for your kind review and all your support it means so much to me, take care.

reply by Ulla on 15-Jun-2018

Well, at the moment, I don't want her caught, but at some point I expect she will have to face reality. Nobody can just take the law into their own hands. xx

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

Well it won't take them to too long to figure out they've got the wrong woman. lol

Opening the side door, Kirk steps out of their van. "I have something you need to see, sir."
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"What is it, Kirk?" - you have an errant piece of punctuation here. lol

"I've already tried, sir, see." He shows him a printed photo." - delete the marks from the end here.

I believe. She was after my Henry too, but I set her straight, put him on a tight leash. - need closing speech marks here.

"I think I'll say goodbye after all; it's the neighborly thing to do.- need closing speech marks here.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018

Thank you for your great review. Figuring it out isn't going to be as easy as you think, thanks to Granny's scheming, lol. Writing myself in the corner actually turned out to be helpful. It put a different spin on things.
Thank you again for all your help and support, it's always appreciated, take care.