The Book of Fine Poetry
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Comment from Colescious36
This was a very moving, emotional poem. I cant put into words how much it touched me. So sad and sweet. He lives on in others. Thank you for sharing...Beautiful!
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018
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This was a very moving, emotional poem. I cant put into words how much it touched me. So sad and sweet. He lives on in others. Thank you for sharing...Beautiful!
Comment Written 21-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018
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And thanks for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from yuccabarry1
A powerful And breathtaking poem. I commend you for sharing such a tragic event. The words brings tears to me eyes. I have seen too many of my comrades laid to rest and the pain is always there it never fades, it just gets easier to deal with. My wife's mother passed over two years ago and she still experiences anguish and depression during the holidays and personal demons because she didn't act sooner in bringing her to our home. I am so glad lives were saved. God bless.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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A powerful And breathtaking poem. I commend you for sharing such a tragic event. The words brings tears to me eyes. I have seen too many of my comrades laid to rest and the pain is always there it never fades, it just gets easier to deal with. My wife's mother passed over two years ago and she still experiences anguish and depression during the holidays and personal demons because she didn't act sooner in bringing her to our home. I am so glad lives were saved. God bless.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Death is always hard but in my son's case...
Not the end but the beginning
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from Sugarray77
An excellent post you have written and shared with us. So poignant and heart felt. Your descriptions were very good and the words you chose conveyed a depth of raw emotion. Thanks for letting us read this. Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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An excellent post you have written and shared with us. So poignant and heart felt. Your descriptions were very good and the words you chose conveyed a depth of raw emotion. Thanks for letting us read this. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Thanks for this and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024
Comment from kiwijenny
All I can say is God too lost a son and understands ...you love much that means you hurt more. This poem was an anthem...your writing heals. God bless and be comforted.
Keep writing
God bless you today
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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All I can say is God too lost a son and understands ...you love much that means you hurt more. This poem was an anthem...your writing heals. God bless and be comforted.
Keep writing
God bless you today
Comment Written 14-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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And thanks for your wonderful review and time kiwi.
Ricky...And thanks for your wonderful review And Time AlCreator.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the state of the heart of a bereaved father lost his only son, time could not heal all pains, now he prays to God and Lord to help breathe in pains; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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This speaks the state of the heart of a bereaved father lost his only son, time could not heal all pains, now he prays to God and Lord to help breathe in pains; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 14-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Thanks again.
Ricky....
Comment from friartuck
Would that I had more stars to offer! It's a beautiful tribute to your son, and it brought tears to my old eyes. I cannot pretend to know what that feels like, but you've brought it closer, close enough to ache for you. I and my family are in the organ donor program because of stories like this. Thank you for sharing it.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Would that I had more stars to offer! It's a beautiful tribute to your son, and it brought tears to my old eyes. I cannot pretend to know what that feels like, but you've brought it closer, close enough to ache for you. I and my family are in the organ donor program because of stories like this. Thank you for sharing it.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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A loss can be measured, attained, excepted, and...
Never EXPECTED.
Bless you kind Friar.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from karenina
You help others who are dealing with similar loss when you allow yourself to remove all armor and expose your broken heart, analyze the pain, the eternity of pain that you must push through daily, every day a victorious win for your dear departed son...for you are his hero, after all...his ordeal and pain is over, he watches his Dad sludge through the mire of sorrow every day and live to rise again and keep going...
You will meet again.
Karenina
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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You help others who are dealing with similar loss when you allow yourself to remove all armor and expose your broken heart, analyze the pain, the eternity of pain that you must push through daily, every day a victorious win for your dear departed son...for you are his hero, after all...his ordeal and pain is over, he watches his Dad sludge through the mire of sorrow every day and live to rise again and keep going...
You will meet again.
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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A beautiful review from a wonderful woman.
Friar Tuck read it first and said it brought tears to his old eyes.
Ricky...
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Ah. I mean it. Every word. --Karenina
