Spirit Soars...
Revelations in life...54 total reviews
Comment from meeshu
this is a wonderful write, I sense the ultimate peace. I love your language always and your form in this one. I missed you lately, love your work, Art A.........meeshu
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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this is a wonderful write, I sense the ultimate peace. I love your language always and your form in this one. I missed you lately, love your work, Art A.........meeshu
Comment Written 12-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Hey meeshu... I landed one with you... Thank you so much for your beautiful and thoughtful review... it meant a lot. yours, diana
Comment from nancyrabbrose
I love the line, "I pull innocence closer to me". I, too, slept on a featherbed for part of my childhood when I was innocent as the goose who gave his feathers. And then you say "I surrender to God's full worth".
That is a wonderful statement. It tells me that I must continue to seek God's "full worth" -- no matter what. Right now I am mad at God because my fiancé today told me that he has terminal brain cancer. I must seek God's "full worth".
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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I love the line, "I pull innocence closer to me". I, too, slept on a featherbed for part of my childhood when I was innocent as the goose who gave his feathers. And then you say "I surrender to God's full worth".
That is a wonderful statement. It tells me that I must continue to seek God's "full worth" -- no matter what. Right now I am mad at God because my fiancé today told me that he has terminal brain cancer. I must seek God's "full worth".
Comment Written 12-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Hey Nancy,
Your review is very humbling and I am honored. The five/plus one stellar review so appreciated. I am sorry to hear about your fiancee' that is devastating and my heart goes out to both of you. Thank you so much for your beautiful and thoughtful review... it meant a lot. yours, diana
Comment from kiwijenny
My daughter just had her first baby boy. He is a week old. Your poem resonated with me
It is mine for the taking,
a gift given at birth.
Our grandson is such a blessing
God bless
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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My daughter just had her first baby boy. He is a week old. Your poem resonated with me
It is mine for the taking,
a gift given at birth.
Our grandson is such a blessing
God bless
Comment Written 12-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Hey KiwiJenny,
Thank you so much for your beautiful and thoughtful review... it meant a lot. yours, diana
Comment from MelB
This is a wonderful poem of faith and reflection you've written. Great description and imagery. I like the artwork too!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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This is a wonderful poem of faith and reflection you've written. Great description and imagery. I like the artwork too!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Hey Mel...
Thank you so much for your beautiful and thoughtful review... it meant a lot. yours, diana
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You're most welcome:)
Comment from Mastery
And the winner of the Faith Poetry contest is.....(drum roll) Diana!
(cymbals please) LOL
Seriously, Di, this is one of the best Faith poems i have ever read on Fanstory. Excellent use of words. Bless you and good luck in the contest. Bob
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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And the winner of the Faith Poetry contest is.....(drum roll) Diana!
(cymbals please) LOL
Seriously, Di, this is one of the best Faith poems i have ever read on Fanstory. Excellent use of words. Bless you and good luck in the contest. Bob
Comment Written 12-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Mastery... I am humbled and honored by your stellar/plus one review... Thank you so much for your beautiful and thoughtful review... it meant a lot. yours, diana
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
Diana. This is a good entry for the contest
Everyone needs to have some kind of faith. It is what we turn when sorrow pays a visit. I hope all is well with you. I really liked this stanza.
"Pondering pure moments in my life,
resting wide-eyed upon a feather bed;
I pull innocence ever closer to me--
then tip toe to the brink."
Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Hi
Diana. This is a good entry for the contest
Everyone needs to have some kind of faith. It is what we turn when sorrow pays a visit. I hope all is well with you. I really liked this stanza.
"Pondering pure moments in my life,
resting wide-eyed upon a feather bed;
I pull innocence ever closer to me--
then tip toe to the brink."
Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 12-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Hey Pam,
Thank you so much for your beautiful and thoughtful review... it meant a lot. yours, diana
Comment from misscookie
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
it s a perfect match
You capture my attention from the first line to the last your words were so deep it touched me very deeply
thank you for sharing
cookie
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
it s a perfect match
You capture my attention from the first line to the last your words were so deep it touched me very deeply
thank you for sharing
cookie
Comment Written 12-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much for your beautiful and thoughtful review... it meant a lot. yours, diana
Comment from Gloria ....
I got quite a chuckle out of your author note about every day unreflective life. It's almost impossible in the fray the busy to be reflective, but your eloquent poem most delicately captures the moment with wide-eyed upon a feather bed.
A lovely entry into the contest and I wish you all the best.
Gloria
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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I got quite a chuckle out of your author note about every day unreflective life. It's almost impossible in the fray the busy to be reflective, but your eloquent poem most delicately captures the moment with wide-eyed upon a feather bed.
A lovely entry into the contest and I wish you all the best.
Gloria
Comment Written 12-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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My feather bed is a preferred spot for me to take a break and refresh. It is my safe spot from being unreflective. thanks Gloria
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Artasylum
from reading your free verse poem
what I feel no matter how many times of the
your twists and turns and mostly it just slaps you around by it's demands... you still have Faith.
Gert
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Hello Artasylum
from reading your free verse poem
what I feel no matter how many times of the
your twists and turns and mostly it just slaps you around by it's demands... you still have Faith.
Gert
Comment Written 12-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much for your beautiful and thoughtful review... it meant a lot. yours, diana
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You are welocme Artasylum
Gert
Comment from Bill Schott
This spiritual poem, Spirit Soars, is a testimony to the powerful bond between mothers and their children. The connection of that to a loving God makes the protection perfect.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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This spiritual poem, Spirit Soars, is a testimony to the powerful bond between mothers and their children. The connection of that to a loving God makes the protection perfect.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much for your beautiful and thoughtful review... it meant a lot. yours, diana
