Spirit Soars...
Revelations in life...54 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
A lovely piece of free verse Art, really well expressed by a loving mother - down to Earth but ever remembering - 'It is mine for the taking, a gift given at birth.
I surrender to God's full worth.' Well done and good luck in the contest' - warm regards Dorothy xx
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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A lovely piece of free verse Art, really well expressed by a loving mother - down to Earth but ever remembering - 'It is mine for the taking, a gift given at birth.
I surrender to God's full worth.' Well done and good luck in the contest' - warm regards Dorothy xx
Comment Written 15-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Hey Dorothy... thanks for your very thoughtful and stellar review. yours, diana
Comment from PhatSOUL1
A very unique sway of passion by this very gifted writer. I enjoyed reading this because I could feel the heart of the poet. It was perfected by it's short length and was well written. Nice job.
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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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A very unique sway of passion by this very gifted writer. I enjoyed reading this because I could feel the heart of the poet. It was perfected by it's short length and was well written. Nice job.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Hey PhatSOUL... always a pleasure... yours, diana
Comment from Janet Foor
An introspective poem of faith, honest and beautifully written. Life does slap us around from time to time and our faith gets us through those troubling times.
Well wrtten free verse poem.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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An introspective poem of faith, honest and beautifully written. Life does slap us around from time to time and our faith gets us through those troubling times.
Well wrtten free verse poem.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 14-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Hey JmF... Thanks so much for your very thoughtful stellar review. yours, diana
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Life twists and turns and mostly it just slaps me around by it's demands... Every once in a while I'm blessed to be still, be quiet and simply, between breathing in and breathing out, I am able to transcribe moments that usually elude me in my every day, unreflective life. '
Wow. This is deep. SO well put together, I love this spiritual poem love and regards and well done Meia x
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Life twists and turns and mostly it just slaps me around by it's demands... Every once in a while I'm blessed to be still, be quiet and simply, between breathing in and breathing out, I am able to transcribe moments that usually elude me in my every day, unreflective life. '
Wow. This is deep. SO well put together, I love this spiritual poem love and regards and well done Meia x
Comment Written 14-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Hey Meia... Thanks so much for the thoughtful comments. yours, diana
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, what a gorgeous poem. I really loved it. Your presentation is spot-on and the words speak for you so eloquently. I enjoyed it. Your author notes are interesting and I so get this:
Every once in a while I'm blessed to be still, be quiet and (simply), between breathing in and breathing out
Thanks for sharing this poem, which I found such a pleasure to read and review, Ana.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Hello, what a gorgeous poem. I really loved it. Your presentation is spot-on and the words speak for you so eloquently. I enjoyed it. Your author notes are interesting and I so get this:
Every once in a while I'm blessed to be still, be quiet and (simply), between breathing in and breathing out
Thanks for sharing this poem, which I found such a pleasure to read and review, Ana.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Hey Sweetie... I so appreciate your reviews and most of all stopping by and reading. yours, diana
Comment from pome lover
this is good, and I hope you don't mind my saying, I'm sorry you are slapped around by life. I guess you are unable to prevent it?
I think I understand that but for your job, you would live elsewhere?
At any rate, this is good writing - closet or no - and I hope you get to leave soon.
Katharine - pome lover
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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this is good, and I hope you don't mind my saying, I'm sorry you are slapped around by life. I guess you are unable to prevent it?
I think I understand that but for your job, you would live elsewhere?
At any rate, this is good writing - closet or no - and I hope you get to leave soon.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 14-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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I agree... and I thank you for your concern and the main thing is I guess to find your way back. yours, diana
Comment from DALLAS01
A beautiful peek into a serene chapter in one's life. One that we can remember and cherish when the page is turned.
I particularly liked the following lines:
Studying the loving parent,
Instinctively knowing she is me;
I forgive myself indiscretions
spun in the name of protection.
For me, this translates into the beginnings of self acceptance.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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A beautiful peek into a serene chapter in one's life. One that we can remember and cherish when the page is turned.
I particularly liked the following lines:
Studying the loving parent,
Instinctively knowing she is me;
I forgive myself indiscretions
spun in the name of protection.
For me, this translates into the beginnings of self acceptance.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Hey Dallas,
Thanks for your incredible stellar/plus-one review. This is such a wonderful surprise. yours, diana
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:-))
Comment from Jonbeyond
Memories...the by product of having experiences...baked in the oven of time.Can we call it God's gift,our ability to review what we have done?...It comes in handy when we want to improve or avoid future mistakes...self understanding is enlightenment indeed
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Memories...the by product of having experiences...baked in the oven of time.Can we call it God's gift,our ability to review what we have done?...It comes in handy when we want to improve or avoid future mistakes...self understanding is enlightenment indeed
Comment Written 14-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Hey Jonbeyond... Thanks so much for your thoughtful review. yours, diana
Comment from William Ross
Nice great write and thoughts in this free verse style, I really believe that at some point everyone turns to God after a while. Pity most wait till they hit bottom to discover his wonders. good luck and have a great day
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Nice great write and thoughts in this free verse style, I really believe that at some point everyone turns to God after a while. Pity most wait till they hit bottom to discover his wonders. good luck and have a great day
Comment Written 14-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Hey William
Thanks so very much for your wonderful and thoughtful review. yours, diana
Comment from karenina
There is a serenity here that I sense is fleeting. Your comments add to that. TO be sure life has us careening from disaster to disaster...and if we're lucky, mere ennui,
a dash of sadness, but rarely time for pristine pools in which to reflect and reaffirm our faith. Beautiful write.
Karenina
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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There is a serenity here that I sense is fleeting. Your comments add to that. TO be sure life has us careening from disaster to disaster...and if we're lucky, mere ennui,
a dash of sadness, but rarely time for pristine pools in which to reflect and reaffirm our faith. Beautiful write.
Karenina
Comment Written 14-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Hey karenina,
Thanks so much for your very thoughtful review. yours, diana
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You are welcome!
