Have Faith
When life is down40 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
A nicely composed faith poem. God's umbrella protects and offers solace. The image is beautiful and perfect to accompany your piece. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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A nicely composed faith poem. God's umbrella protects and offers solace. The image is beautiful and perfect to accompany your piece. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Pamusart
Hi kahpot. This is a good entry in the contest. Short but sweet. We all need faith in one way or another. Well done. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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Hi kahpot. This is a good entry in the contest. Short but sweet. We all need faith in one way or another. Well done. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 11-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Kahpot!
What a wonderful rendering of an antonym poem. Although it is brief, it "packs a wallop!" The message is beautiful - with the rendering of Mother Theresa = very powerful, for her message to the untouchables is exactly as you write.
Thank you for this powerful message.
diane
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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Hello Kahpot!
What a wonderful rendering of an antonym poem. Although it is brief, it "packs a wallop!" The message is beautiful - with the rendering of Mother Theresa = very powerful, for her message to the untouchables is exactly as you write.
Thank you for this powerful message.
diane
Comment Written 11-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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Thank you for your excellent review****kahpot
Comment from Air Spirit
Exceptional! Every word is meaningful, and further complements, correlates and consciously completes the full essence of word prior to it... they all tie together like a perfect bow, most apropos for the present of our Life -- and the message is a strong and profound spiritual truth and statement of Faith ... you say so much in so few words. This is definitely one of the best short 7 word poems I have read. The picture is also absolutely perfect for this poem and adds even more definition and meaning to the poem.. exceptional job!
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Exceptional! Every word is meaningful, and further complements, correlates and consciously completes the full essence of word prior to it... they all tie together like a perfect bow, most apropos for the present of our Life -- and the message is a strong and profound spiritual truth and statement of Faith ... you say so much in so few words. This is definitely one of the best short 7 word poems I have read. The picture is also absolutely perfect for this poem and adds even more definition and meaning to the poem.. exceptional job!
Comment Written 11-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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Wow thank you for this wonderful review I am honoured****kahpot
Comment from country ranch writer
Having faith I think goes hand and hand with hope and charity for our fellow man. We have so much to offer the world but all non-believers keep doing is trying to drag us down.
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Having faith I think goes hand and hand with hope and charity for our fellow man. We have so much to offer the world but all non-believers keep doing is trying to drag us down.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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Comment from happykat4
I like the powerful message this short poem gives to the reader. It is only with faith, especially in our world, and Jesus being close can we ever hope to not let the evil overtake us. I wish you the very best in the contest. Kat
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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I like the powerful message this short poem gives to the reader. It is only with faith, especially in our world, and Jesus being close can we ever hope to not let the evil overtake us. I wish you the very best in the contest. Kat
Comment Written 11-Jun-2018
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Thank you for your wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'Faith Poetry' writing prompt.
Your story and message is well told in your short verse.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Faith Poetry' writing prompt.
Your story and message is well told in your short verse.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 11-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written antonym poem. To God it doesn't matter where we find ourselves or what we do as long as we have faith in Him, He will be there whenever we need Him.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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A very well-written antonym poem. To God it doesn't matter where we find ourselves or what we do as long as we have faith in Him, He will be there whenever we need Him.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for your wonderfulreview****kahpot
Comment from Swampfox1
This is a very good entry into the faith poetry contest for God takes us under his protective wings that could certainly be viewed as an umbrella and there we are above the destruction and above all those who would try to hurt us. Have a wonderful week.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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This is a very good entry into the faith poetry contest for God takes us under his protective wings that could certainly be viewed as an umbrella and there we are above the destruction and above all those who would try to hurt us. Have a wonderful week.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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you're welcome
Comment from JanPerry
It's fitting nicely with under and above. There is no mistakes. Probably don't need caps for above.
God looks down at your umbrella as we rise above you.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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It's fitting nicely with under and above. There is no mistakes. Probably don't need caps for above.
God looks down at your umbrella as we rise above you.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
