Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think you've done a good job of capturing the mysteriousness of the night sky.
Your verse is descriptive and well done.
Thank you for sharing this interesting piece with us.
Sharon

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018

Thanks so much for the five star review and for your perspective on this piece. Glad you enjoyed it and found it so inspiring and interesting. I appreciate the support estory

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

This is an excellent Quatrain poem. I like how you've developed the theme of stars and incorporated it into analogies of the meaning of life. Well done!

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 Comment Written 09-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018

Thanks so much for the excellent review and for your enjoyment of this poem. A couple of the images are a little deeper than what they first appear, probably some of my better ones, in a poem that is in an unusual style and format for me. estory

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Stars dancing the dance of darkness
And lighting the clouds above the moonlit oceans
Tracing out the shapes of faces
And whispering something in the sacred silence
This is my favorite verse....mysterious
God bless

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 Comment Written 09-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018

Thanks so much for reading and letting me know you enjoyed it. Those stanzas were my favorite too, maybe along with the empty arms and silent music. Making the connections with readers is what its all about, so thanks again for the read I appreciate it estory