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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from frogbook
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Oh, how sad! So I am ashamed that I am laughing a bit also-haha. Devilish fun here with this sweet little picture and another successful part of "Worlds".

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018
    Thanks, FB
Comment from nomi338
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No, not those cute little rodents. Kevin Condor is a mean old carnivore. I think that he should become a vegan so that he can leave the cute little animals alone. I hope he gets indigestion.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
    I understand they were et without regret.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute poem you have penned about Kevin who used to be a ferret farmer. You used very good and cute words with adorable art work to go with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. Teri

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018
    Thanks, Teri
reply by Teri7 on 09-Jun-2018
    you are so welcome my friend! Have a great Saturday!
Comment from Ginnygray
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Kevin condor who used to be a ferret farmer near the coast has three weasels, two named Cecil, one named Sid. They die and Kevin cooks them up for a feast.
Interesting condor!

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018
    Thanks, Ginny
Comment from Debbie Pope
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I love your weasels named Cecils, and I can't believe that your farmer ate them. Very funny poem, but not so funny for Cecil. I can see why your farmer is down to his last 3. He probably already deboned the others. Fun, but gross, poem.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2018


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    Thanks, Debbie
Comment from Donka Kristeva
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Unexpected ending! Funny and sad at the same time; but the style is unique-- few words give a big story. The photo is the star!

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2018


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    Thanks, Donka
Comment from kiwijenny
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That wasn't weasily done.. to cook up each brother done...yikes being a ferret farmer's no fun
Sorry did they go 'pop'
This made me smile and I love the name
God bless

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2018
    Thanks, Jenny
Comment from lyenochka
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Oh dear. Now would a condor even need to "cook" them or was he just a "condor" in name? But as a condor wouldn't have the patience to farm anything. Went from ferrets to weasels? Are they the same? Fun rhymes in a story even if with a sad ending.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2018
    It?s a guy. Weasels, minks, ferrets, and tigers are all related (except tigers).
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Oh my goodness Bill? I did not expect that? Glad it is just humorous poetry and not for real! You made me smile, a fun write, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2018


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    Thanks, Dolly
Comment from damommy
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This really gave a big ole laugh! I think I'd pass up any invitation from "Condor" to eat. The rhythm in this poem is great, and the rhyming is spot on.

Poor little ferrets. They're so cute.

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 Comment Written 08-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2018
    Thanks, da