Comment from Kerry Wanstall

Excellent

Craig, you've penned another beauty using one of the "linguistic curiosities". Your choice of context in which to showcase and allow the reader to understand "orthophony" is particular apt and most creative.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018

Thanks very much, Kerry, for the lovely comments. Most appreciated - Craig

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

One of my favourite films, Love your poem, love Pygmalion, George Bernard Shaw, and 'my fair lady' and your take on the story and how words should be said or not said, forever pushing the boundaries in poetry and winning, great words here, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 05-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018

Thanks so much, Dolly. I really appreciate the kind remarks. Craig

Comment from Angela Hayes

Excellent

Good read, educational, out spoken characters, black and white photo to match the time and poem, poem is very modern day, funny, well presented, good choice.. very interesting. Good Luck!

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 Comment Written 05-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018

Thanks very much for the kind words - Craig

reply by Angela Hayes on 05-Jun-2018

:)