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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from nomi338
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Wow! I can think of a few offensive people who are prime candidates for being carried off by a Condor to free the earth of their vile presence. I don't think I need to call any names, the guilty know who they are.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2018
    I have number you can call.
Comment from BeasPeas
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This one, I like, Bill. Illustrated by an amazing sculpture. I can picture the condorman dining alfresco. Interesting pictorially and clever wording. Marilyn

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
    Thank you, Marilyn.
Comment from Raul1
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Excellent poem! I see that this person flew over the entire city. I don't think I could do that, or all the people can do it as well, but with a flying it is possible. Interesting. He also dives too and had his fresh glass of drink. Great job!

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
    Thanks, Raul
reply by Raul1 on 04-Jun-2018
    You're welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
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Fun one, Bill. I like your word play of "carri-off" instead of condors' favorite food of "carrion." I think that the word 'al fresco' is written as two words. That chianti must be a hazard to flying.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
    All sources have alfresco as one word. The exception would be Allen (Al) Fresco. (chortle, sigh)
reply by lyenochka on 04-Jun-2018
    Interesting. "Al' is a preposition so I would have thought it separate. Dictionary.com has it both ways and Cambridge has it has two:
    https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/al-fresco
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
    Don?t trust Cambridge; they think labor is spelled with an ?ou?. (Humorous utterance)