Our Sweet Greyson
Tanka contest entry26 total reviews
Comment from dovemarie
Dear Teri, Excellent, sweet tanka about Greyson. I bet he's going to feel famous by the time he reads your book about him, maybe he'll even try his hand at writing! Blessings to you for having him. Love, Donna
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Dear Teri, Excellent, sweet tanka about Greyson. I bet he's going to feel famous by the time he reads your book about him, maybe he'll even try his hand at writing! Blessings to you for having him. Love, Donna
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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lol lol You might be right Donna, but somehow I know he will just be a regular good guy, I am praying! Thanks for the great review and comments! love, Teri
Comment from damommy
Oh, yes, the dreaded preschool. I always wanted to keep mine at home, too. I wish I'd been able to home school in those days like they do now.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Oh, yes, the dreaded preschool. I always wanted to keep mine at home, too. I wish I'd been able to home school in those days like they do now.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much my friend for the lovely review and very nice comments. We have told them we would home school him if they want us to. Who know? love, Teri
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That would be wonderful.
Comment from Tootsie
This is such a charming little boy. I can see why you love him so much. Children add so much to the family. My Mom used to say children bring their love, God Bless and happy days ahead
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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This is such a charming little boy. I can see why you love him so much. Children add so much to the family. My Mom used to say children bring their love, God Bless and happy days ahead
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much my friend for the lovely review and nice comments. I think they bring and share a lot of love too! love, Teri
Comment from c_lucas
Interaction with a child during its formative years will bring about a stronger bond. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Interaction with a child during its formative years will bring about a stronger bond. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much Charlie for the very nice review and comments. it is a joy to me to be with him as much as I can! Blessings, Teri
Comment from apky
Hello Teri,
What a wonderful poem for Greyson!
He certainly looks much older than when I first read your essays and poems about him with his still charmingly halting sentences. He looks absolutely adorable here.
Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Hello Teri,
What a wonderful poem for Greyson!
He certainly looks much older than when I first read your essays and poems about him with his still charmingly halting sentences. He looks absolutely adorable here.
Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and very nice comments! blessings, Teri
Comment from judiverse
This is so sweet. An adorable picture. Your syllable count is right on. It is so wonderful to see the vim and vigor in a youngster. Unfortunately, we have to lose some of that joy as we age. Here's hoping he can hold on to that sense of life. I'm sure he's a blessing to you. Grown and Grayson--nice alliteration there. Best of luck in the contest. judi
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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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This is so sweet. An adorable picture. Your syllable count is right on. It is so wonderful to see the vim and vigor in a youngster. Unfortunately, we have to lose some of that joy as we age. Here's hoping he can hold on to that sense of life. I'm sure he's a blessing to you. Grown and Grayson--nice alliteration there. Best of luck in the contest. judi
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much Judi for the very nice review and lovely comments! love, Teri
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You're welcome. Such a sweet boy! judi
