The Intrusive Cat
Dialogue contest20 total reviews
Comment from ElegantButler
Yes! God most definitely loves kitties! I tell my cat He loves her all the time. This was a really sweet shirt story. It was uplifting and fun to read.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Yes! God most definitely loves kitties! I tell my cat He loves her all the time. This was a really sweet shirt story. It was uplifting and fun to read.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Thank you for the very nice review and comments. Blessings, Teri
Comment from damommy
Bless their little hearts. They stopped to think how fortunate they are and that they could share their good fortune with Mama Cat. How sweet.
I've taken in so many strays the ones already here just move over for the 'new kid.' haha
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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Bless their little hearts. They stopped to think how fortunate they are and that they could share their good fortune with Mama Cat. How sweet.
I've taken in so many strays the ones already here just move over for the 'new kid.' haha
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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lol Thank you my friend for the very nice review and comments. You have some really behaved little cats my friend! love you! Teri
Comment from Heather Knight
This is so sweet, Teri. I loved the way you put words in your cats' mouths.
I have to say my favorite bit is when you speak about the club. I think the name is very funny.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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This is so sweet, Teri. I loved the way you put words in your cats' mouths.
I have to say my favorite bit is when you speak about the club. I think the name is very funny.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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lol Thanks so much Maria for the very lovely review, comments and pretty six stars. If you could only see them in person you would think the same thing. They are so cute, but so spoiled and do not like intruders at all! lol love, Teri
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written dialogue between the cats that don't want their bossy visitor to comes around and intrude their space. They think the best solution will be when they.pray about it.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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A very well-written dialogue between the cats that don't want their bossy visitor to comes around and intrude their space. They think the best solution will be when they.pray about it.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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Thank you for the lovely review and comments. love, They really act this way. I just made up the words, but you can see it in their actions! lol love, Teri
Comment from royowen
I'm so glad you taught them there's a God that cares for cats, but then I believe they all know about God in their own way, Look at the birds who fly south for the winter, the whales who migrate each year, the salmon going home to roost. I think this is as good a dialogue article as I've read dear Teri, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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I'm so glad you taught them there's a God that cares for cats, but then I believe they all know about God in their own way, Look at the birds who fly south for the winter, the whales who migrate each year, the salmon going home to roost. I think this is as good a dialogue article as I've read dear Teri, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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Thank you Roy for the very lovely review and comments. I agree with you. I sing a song that says , "The birds up in the air know their creator. Nature sings an awesome song of praise." Blessings, Teri
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Well don Teri
Comment from c_lucas
Regardless of the time and reason, a strange cat moves in, a power struggle begins. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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Regardless of the time and reason, a strange cat moves in, a power struggle begins. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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Thank you Charlie. You are so right my friend. They do not like intruders at all. They do not like momma cat at all either! lol Blessings, Teri
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You're welcome Teri. Charlie
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the fun of thinking about the dialogues of the intrusive cat, Fluffy cat observes and comments so nicely about Momma cat, moral attitude and relation lessons are interesting; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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This speaks the fun of thinking about the dialogues of the intrusive cat, Fluffy cat observes and comments so nicely about Momma cat, moral attitude and relation lessons are interesting; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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Thank you for the very nice review and comments! Blessings, Teri
Comment from aanneee
I really enjoyed this tale with talking kitties acting a little bit as the human. I wish you luck in the Dialogue Only Writing Contest. I really got a kick out of this and I thank you very much for the grin on my face...Dinah
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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I really enjoyed this tale with talking kitties acting a little bit as the human. I wish you luck in the Dialogue Only Writing Contest. I really got a kick out of this and I thank you very much for the grin on my face...Dinah
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much Dinah for the very lovely review and comments. I am glad it made you smile! love, Teri
Comment from RFL
I am obsessed with trying to get into the minds of our animal friends. And, so, I appreciate your piece very much. If you get a chance, you may want to look at my recent piece, A Golden Moment, where I put myself into the soul of a Golden Retriever. Maybe we should get an animal story club together. What do you think? Best regards, Rona
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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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I am obsessed with trying to get into the minds of our animal friends. And, so, I appreciate your piece very much. If you get a chance, you may want to look at my recent piece, A Golden Moment, where I put myself into the soul of a Golden Retriever. Maybe we should get an animal story club together. What do you think? Best regards, Rona
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Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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Thank you Rona for the lovely review and comments. There is a club called Animal Crackers already. You might take a look at that! love, Teri
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Great. Thanks for the info. Rona
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You have got into the heads of these cats and your dialogue is fun and lighthearted Teri! You gave the cats a voice here and I enjoyed the conversation, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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You have got into the heads of these cats and your dialogue is fun and lighthearted Teri! You gave the cats a voice here and I enjoyed the conversation, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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lol You know Dolly it is almost like you can tell what they are saying and thinking as if they were pouting. lol Thanks for the lovely review and comments. love, Teri
