The Intrusive Cat
Dialogue contest20 total reviews
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Hi Teri,
A lovely light hearted story and a delight to read.
The 'pecking' order can definitely ruffle some feathers. Lol.
Ok! I realise they are cats but the principle is the same.
Peace and harmony should always reign supreme.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2018
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Hi Teri,
A lovely light hearted story and a delight to read.
The 'pecking' order can definitely ruffle some feathers. Lol.
Ok! I realise they are cats but the principle is the same.
Peace and harmony should always reign supreme.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 06-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2018
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Thank you Shirley for the very nice review and comments. It was fun to try to get in the head of those two cats of ours! lol love, Teri
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Great story and a great moral ending to learn from . I love the interaction and the wording you used tomake them human. Nicely done
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Great story and a great moral ending to learn from . I love the interaction and the wording you used tomake them human. Nicely done
Comment Written 05-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much Barb for the very nice review, comments and lovely six stars! love you! Teri
Comment from karenina
It is certainly an original take on the dialogue contest format....cute to imagine kittens chit chatting about the goings on in their house! I like the FBAC....made me chuckle!
Karenina
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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It is certainly an original take on the dialogue contest format....cute to imagine kittens chit chatting about the goings on in their house! I like the FBAC....made me chuckle!
Karenina
Comment Written 05-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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lol lol Thank you so much for the very nice review and comments! love, Teri
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Smile.....always my friend...
Comment from misscookie
Wow!
This was a great story and I read it to my great grand daughter and she loved it.
And that means this was a winner this is how I find out if my story or poems on the light side are good.
Thank you for sharking
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Wow!
This was a great story and I read it to my great grand daughter and she loved it.
And that means this was a winner this is how I find out if my story or poems on the light side are good.
Thank you for sharking
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Thank you my friend for the lovely review and comments. Tell your great grand daughter thanks for loving it too! Have a blessed day my friend! love, Teri
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You're very welcome, have a nice day
Cookie
Comment from giraffmang
The idea of two cats kneeling down to pray put a smile on my face this morning. lol
that daddy let's in the house - lets on this occasion.
cat that daddy let's in the house / as if Daddy loves her - it's probably best to present Daddy the same way each time.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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The idea of two cats kneeling down to pray put a smile on my face this morning. lol
that daddy let's in the house - lets on this occasion.
cat that daddy let's in the house / as if Daddy loves her - it's probably best to present Daddy the same way each time.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much for the very nice review, comments and help! This is just what came to mind when I thought of our cats and how they act at times! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Pamusart
Hi Teri. This is a great entry for the contest. I had a cat once whom I named Cat. Then she had kittens and she became Mama Cat. She gave me the best cat I ever had, her daughter, Pearl. I enjoyed your story very much.
"I have learned in my short life thus far it's better not to start trouble if you don't "
I would suggest putting the word that between far and it's because there needs to be a pause before it's.
"I have learned in my short life thus far that it's better not to start trouble if you don't "
Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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Hi Teri. This is a great entry for the contest. I had a cat once whom I named Cat. Then she had kittens and she became Mama Cat. She gave me the best cat I ever had, her daughter, Pearl. I enjoyed your story very much.
"I have learned in my short life thus far it's better not to start trouble if you don't "
I would suggest putting the word that between far and it's because there needs to be a pause before it's.
"I have learned in my short life thus far that it's better not to start trouble if you don't "
Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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Thank you my friend for the very nice review, comments and advice! love, Teri
Comment from MelB
Let's go play with out cat nip and toys for a while!" - with ou(r)
Great dialogue and a fun little story. The truth is, animals sure do get jealous of each other and the affection they receive. Best wishes in the contest, friend.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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Let's go play with out cat nip and toys for a while!" - with ou(r)
Great dialogue and a fun little story. The truth is, animals sure do get jealous of each other and the affection they receive. Best wishes in the contest, friend.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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Thank my friend for the very nice review and comments! You are right. They do get jealous! love, Teri
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You're welcome:)
Comment from lyenochka
A very sweet story, Teri! It's so nice that you take care of homeless cats, too. Glad that Muffy and Fluffy are so willing to follow your prayerful example.
A couple of comments:
"that daddy let's in the house " (lets)
" Let's go play with out cat nip" (our catnip)
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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A very sweet story, Teri! It's so nice that you take care of homeless cats, too. Glad that Muffy and Fluffy are so willing to follow your prayerful example.
A couple of comments:
"that daddy let's in the house " (lets)
" Let's go play with out cat nip" (our catnip)
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much Helen for the very nice review, comments and help! love, Teri
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Teri,
This is sooo cute. Love it. The conversation flows well & makes sense. What a sweet lesson Fluffy & Muffy learned after learning/praying. Great lesson for all! We are all created by God.
I had 1 dog growing up named Muffin--Muffy for short. Great name.
Thanks for sharing. Best wishes dear friend. Jan
suggestions or file 13 - trash
. . that daddy [ lets ]
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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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Teri,
This is sooo cute. Love it. The conversation flows well & makes sense. What a sweet lesson Fluffy & Muffy learned after learning/praying. Great lesson for all! We are all created by God.
I had 1 dog growing up named Muffin--Muffy for short. Great name.
Thanks for sharing. Best wishes dear friend. Jan
suggestions or file 13 - trash
. . that daddy [ lets ]
. . .cat nip [ catnip ]
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much Jan for the very nice review, comments and help! love, Teri
Comment from CD Richards
You did a great job of getting all this story out using only spoken words, Teri. It's a fun tale, and knowing how cats behave, I can well imagine it. They do get quite jealous and possessive of their human servants! Well done, and best of luck in the contest.
Craig
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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You did a great job of getting all this story out using only spoken words, Teri. It's a fun tale, and knowing how cats behave, I can well imagine it. They do get quite jealous and possessive of their human servants! Well done, and best of luck in the contest.
Craig
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much my friend for the very nice review and comments. They are very jealous of each other at times! lol Blessings, Teri
