Global Warming
Eventually ... it won't matter11 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Global Warming, has the right set up and suggests a greater and more permanent occurrence which would be completely out of our hands and seemingly instantaneous. Hot!
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This 5-7-5, Global Warming, has the right set up and suggests a greater and more permanent occurrence which would be completely out of our hands and seemingly instantaneous. Hot!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
Comment from JDRBAR
Aren't you glad you won't be around to see this spectacular event? Heck, what's a few billion years of waiting for the inevitable? LOL Good luck with this.
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Aren't you glad you won't be around to see this spectacular event? Heck, what's a few billion years of waiting for the inevitable? LOL Good luck with this.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
Comment from meeshu
well written tongue firmly in cheek. i am pulling for global warming over the ice age predictions. i look better in summer clothes..
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well written tongue firmly in cheek. i am pulling for global warming over the ice age predictions. i look better in summer clothes..
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
Comment from Elizabeth Brown
A good example of 5-7-5 poetry with an ominous message that makes us all think of what could be. Perhaps we will all end in a blaze of glory but maybe we should take heed. Good luck! Elizabeth.
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A good example of 5-7-5 poetry with an ominous message that makes us all think of what could be. Perhaps we will all end in a blaze of glory but maybe we should take heed. Good luck! Elizabeth.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A scary write and I hope this isn't what there is to come! But your write is honest and a blaze of glory could be the outcome, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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A scary write and I hope this isn't what there is to come! But your write is honest and a blaze of glory could be the outcome, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a fine entry for the 5-7-5 FIRE prompt. The photograph is outstanding and really adds to the impact of your entry. Well done and good luck with this contest!!
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This is a fine entry for the 5-7-5 FIRE prompt. The photograph is outstanding and really adds to the impact of your entry. Well done and good luck with this contest!!
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
Comment from rspoet
A little different take on global warming
Perhaps it should be called global warning:
try Pluto, the non-planet, its ice will melt
and may become the new Eden
Excellent 5-7-4 poem and entry
Good luck in the contest
RS
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A little different take on global warming
Perhaps it should be called global warning:
try Pluto, the non-planet, its ice will melt
and may become the new Eden
Excellent 5-7-4 poem and entry
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
Comment from RodG
Some scientists have predicted such a solar occurrence that will end life as we know it on our planet. Not something one likes to think about and I don't foresee any "glory" in its outcome. But each to his own vision and yours is vividly conveyed.
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Some scientists have predicted such a solar occurrence that will end life as we know it on our planet. Not something one likes to think about and I don't foresee any "glory" in its outcome. But each to his own vision and yours is vividly conveyed.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the '5-7-5 Fire' writing prompt.
Your short verse tells of global warming in vivid detail.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the '5-7-5 Fire' writing prompt.
Your short verse tells of global warming in vivid detail.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
Comment from ElegantButler
And that is why immortality would really stink.
A very good poem. You really brought the concept forward in a very strong manner. One day, perhaps, that will happen. Hopefully not during our time.
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And that is why immortality would really stink.
A very good poem. You really brought the concept forward in a very strong manner. One day, perhaps, that will happen. Hopefully not during our time.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
