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A six word poem40 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the I Imagine writing prompt.
Your short verse tells of imagining earth's destruction very clearly.
Nicely done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the I Imagine writing prompt.
Your short verse tells of imagining earth's destruction very clearly.
Nicely done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 05-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written six-word poem for the I imagine contest. We are falling apart as fast as earth is falling upart by our hands and wrong doings. We are heading to disaster.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2018
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A very well-written six-word poem for the I imagine contest. We are falling apart as fast as earth is falling upart by our hands and wrong doings. We are heading to disaster.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from meeshu
well done Kahpot, a great sentiment, I fear that Mankind won't come together on this issue until the situation beyond dire............meeshu
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2018
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well done Kahpot, a great sentiment, I fear that Mankind won't come together on this issue until the situation beyond dire............meeshu
Comment Written 05-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2018
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I agree and Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Hitcher
It is a nice thought friend but unfortunately man has a problem with sharing, he is a taker, user and abuser for power is the only game in town and OH... how they seek it, covert it go after it. No collaboration there! A strong thought provoking six word poem. Good luck!
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2018
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It is a nice thought friend but unfortunately man has a problem with sharing, he is a taker, user and abuser for power is the only game in town and OH... how they seek it, covert it go after it. No collaboration there! A strong thought provoking six word poem. Good luck!
Comment Written 05-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much and I agree****kahpot
Comment from Pamusart
Hi. There is a six word poem contest as well that this would fit into. It is a good entry for either contest. Certainly a fine one for the I Imagine contest. I write about this topic a lot. It is so avoidable. But people do not want to take the trouble. Cloth diabetes rather than plastic. Diaper service. Still requires more work but is reusable and cuts down on plastic waste. Recycle all bottles. Use clean energy. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Hi. There is a six word poem contest as well that this would fit into. It is a good entry for either contest. Certainly a fine one for the I Imagine contest. I write about this topic a lot. It is so avoidable. But people do not want to take the trouble. Cloth diabetes rather than plastic. Diaper service. Still requires more work but is reusable and cuts down on plastic waste. Recycle all bottles. Use clean energy. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much and yes a cleaner environment is apart of it all****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
So very true. With the picture, you show "Earth's destination" without collaboration. Seems like there is so much emnity in the world and blatant lack of concern for the Earth's resources.
Suggestions:
Since we're talking about the planet, I'd capitalize Earth
and remove the comma after 'without' because collaboration is the object of the preposition.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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So very true. With the picture, you show "Earth's destination" without collaboration. Seems like there is so much emnity in the world and blatant lack of concern for the Earth's resources.
Suggestions:
Since we're talking about the planet, I'd capitalize Earth
and remove the comma after 'without' because collaboration is the object of the preposition.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much, I have once again taken your advice and it looks and reads much better, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Xia Thornwood
The title and picture add a lot to your poem. You put all resources to good use. Was the comma after "Without" intentional? All in all, very potent.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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The title and picture add a lot to your poem. You put all resources to good use. Was the comma after "Without" intentional? All in all, very potent.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much I have since removed the coma did this cost me the fifth star or I am I lacking something in this poem, many thanks ****kahpot
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As I am not yet an author, and thus cannot reward 6 stars, I generally save 5 five for poems and stories that really stand out to me, but there was nothing wrong with the poem. I'll change it.
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Thank you for the reply I definitely did not want six, just wondered if Grammer needed improving to earn five, once again many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Gloria ....
Hey you wise person. First with the incredible insight of your six word poem, which I've become a big fan of, but also using it as a contest entry for I imagine.
This is a terrific entry and man alive I hope humanity can get its act together sooner than later.
Excellent work and I wish you all good luck in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Hey you wise person. First with the incredible insight of your six word poem, which I've become a big fan of, but also using it as a contest entry for I imagine.
This is a terrific entry and man alive I hope humanity can get its act together sooner than later.
Excellent work and I wish you all good luck in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much, and so do I****kahpot
Comment from Thomas Bowling
You make an excellent point. We have to learn to work together or we will die together. You would think that after centuries of warfare, we would learn to cooperate.
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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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You make an excellent point. We have to learn to work together or we will die together. You would think that after centuries of warfare, we would learn to cooperate.
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Donka Kristeva
The message is clear even with a few words. I think the poem could have been richer in meaning if more elaborated. The chosen picture is excellent -- speaks by itself.
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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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The message is clear even with a few words. I think the poem could have been richer in meaning if more elaborated. The chosen picture is excellent -- speaks by itself.
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for your sound advice and I have with help of reviews, tried to elaborate, many thanks****kahpot
