This is how
A six word poem40 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Kahpot, a clever six word poem and a very poetic way of telling us how you see the fate of the Earth if we do not take more responsibility to care for it. I hope how you imagine it is just that - well done and good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018
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Hi Kahpot, a clever six word poem and a very poetic way of telling us how you see the fate of the Earth if we do not take more responsibility to care for it. I hope how you imagine it is just that - well done and good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 21-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there,
Yes, this could be the possible outcome of our mismanagement of the earth God so lovingly gave to us. The artwork you chose was wonderful because it is said He will bring down fire to destroy the earth this time since the last time He used water.
May we pray together for better things to come,
~patty~
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Hi there,
Yes, this could be the possible outcome of our mismanagement of the earth God so lovingly gave to us. The artwork you chose was wonderful because it is said He will bring down fire to destroy the earth this time since the last time He used water.
May we pray together for better things to come,
~patty~
Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much and Yes if the hierarchy don't do something praying is all we have left****kahpot
Comment from l.raven
Hi Kahpot, I am so sorry I am out of sixes...******...but your poem is so very true...if we don't stop digging into the earth...and use the resource's God gave us...we are going to totally destroy it...and we are close now...very well written my sweet friend...picture...perfect...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Hi Kahpot, I am so sorry I am out of sixes...******...but your poem is so very true...if we don't stop digging into the earth...and use the resource's God gave us...we are going to totally destroy it...and we are close now...very well written my sweet friend...picture...perfect...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Thank you so very much for your excellent review****kahpot
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you are so very welcome my friend...xxoo love
Comment from tfawcus
Even without the author note, your poem speaks volumes. Unfortunately, many of the established instruments of collaboration seem to be falling apart a bit. One can only hope.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Even without the author note, your poem speaks volumes. Unfortunately, many of the established instruments of collaboration seem to be falling apart a bit. One can only hope.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much and Yes they are falling apart****kahpot
Comment from friartuck
Yes indeed! Unfortunately, however, that seems to be the direction in which we're headed. You've packed much truth in six short words, but no one seems to be listening. Solid! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Yes indeed! Unfortunately, however, that seems to be the direction in which we're headed. You've packed much truth in six short words, but no one seems to be listening. Solid! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Earth's destination with much negotiation may survive as the collaboration has broke down of late, we could be heading for a disaster, wise words here, love Dolly c
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Earth's destination with much negotiation may survive as the collaboration has broke down of late, we could be heading for a disaster, wise words here, love Dolly c
Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for your excellent review****kahpot
Comment from Dean Kuch
Yeah, I have to agree with you wholeheartedly on this point, kahpot.
We're not very good caretakers when it comes to taking care of the only planet in the entire solar system we call "home."
Now, massive volcanic eruptions, tsunami, twisters and hurricanes (not to mention all of the destructive wild fires and deadly mud slides we've experienced lately) have me believing that Mother Earth is saying, "Enough is enough!"
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Yeah, I have to agree with you wholeheartedly on this point, kahpot.
We're not very good caretakers when it comes to taking care of the only planet in the entire solar system we call "home."
Now, massive volcanic eruptions, tsunami, twisters and hurricanes (not to mention all of the destructive wild fires and deadly mud slides we've experienced lately) have me believing that Mother Earth is saying, "Enough is enough!"
Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much and I agree we need to HELP our home if we wish to stay, this may be corny but it's a bit like paying rent or mortgage****kahpot
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I don't think it's corny at all.
You're welcome, kahpot.
~Dean
Comment from Michele Harber
What a sad but honest commentary about our times. Let's hope the collaboration comes to pass before your vision becomes a reality. I love your use of the title to perfectly extend the six-word limit.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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What a sad but honest commentary about our times. Let's hope the collaboration comes to pass before your vision becomes a reality. I love your use of the title to perfectly extend the six-word limit.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Thank you for your excellent review****kahpot
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent poem that say much in just a few words
It seems this is way it's always been,
but now the forces of destruction grow in consequence
but there is still hope that sanity will reassert itself.
Excellent poem and presentation
Nicely done
Best wishes to you and our planet
RS
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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This is an excellent poem that say much in just a few words
It seems this is way it's always been,
but now the forces of destruction grow in consequence
but there is still hope that sanity will reassert itself.
Excellent poem and presentation
Nicely done
Best wishes to you and our planet
RS
Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for your excellent review****kahpot
Comment from Ash Bleu
The world would be a better place without civilization, as sad as it is. Sometimes I like to think we can save it but collaboration takes a lot of people and support.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
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The world would be a better place without civilization, as sad as it is. Sometimes I like to think we can save it but collaboration takes a lot of people and support.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much and we can only hope****kahpot
