An Experience with the Holy Spirit!
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Comment from brenda faye curtis
I had such an experience when I was still in high school--one moment I was sinking into despair, and the next, my mind, heart and soul were filled with light, a light that burned away all the darkness. I'm so glad you were blessed with this experience, my friend!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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I had such an experience when I was still in high school--one moment I was sinking into despair, and the next, my mind, heart and soul were filled with light, a light that burned away all the darkness. I'm so glad you were blessed with this experience, my friend!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much Brenda for the lovely review and comments. There is nothing else like it in this world! love, Teri
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You're welcome, my friend! :)
Comment from Tootsie
It's so nice to read of your spiritual experience,I know these things happen, not to me yet, but I know it will if I am patient and wait on the Lord all will be well.
Thank you for sharing and may the grace of God be with you both.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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It's so nice to read of your spiritual experience,I know these things happen, not to me yet, but I know it will if I am patient and wait on the Lord all will be well.
Thank you for sharing and may the grace of God be with you both.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much for the very nice review and lovely comments. I believe you will also my friend. I happen to hear from Him in the wee hours of the morning! love, Teri
Comment from meeshu
this is truly a blessed experience, Teri. I don't talk about this much,
but ?something? spoke to me through a hummingbird. yeah,, I know, that's why I don't talk about it..........meeshu
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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this is truly a blessed experience, Teri. I don't talk about this much,
but ?something? spoke to me through a hummingbird. yeah,, I know, that's why I don't talk about it..........meeshu
Comment Written 02-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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Thank you Meeshu for the lovely review and comments. He can use whomever or whatever He wants to use to speak to us. I believe that my friend. Little birds are so beautiful and I know only God could have created them! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Amen, sister! What a joyful and uplifting experience you have managed to put to pen -- to shout how you live in that light every day!
The rhythm is quite catchy as it carries the reader throughout its entirety -- never stumbling or awkward, although I would suggest placing some "spacing" between chosen line groupings .... it is something that younger folks need to hear/read, but one glance at such a large grouping of words tend to turn them "off" sometimes (take it from the high school teacher)! :-)
The only other suggestion I have is simply to read back through it and change some of the "tenses" of the words such as was/were and is/are....small things that can be stumbling blocks to certain folks out here! :-)
Finally, may YOUR blessing reach out and truly bless countless of those around you both in your life's circle and beyond, for that is truly the business of the Holy Spirit!
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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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Amen, sister! What a joyful and uplifting experience you have managed to put to pen -- to shout how you live in that light every day!
The rhythm is quite catchy as it carries the reader throughout its entirety -- never stumbling or awkward, although I would suggest placing some "spacing" between chosen line groupings .... it is something that younger folks need to hear/read, but one glance at such a large grouping of words tend to turn them "off" sometimes (take it from the high school teacher)! :-)
The only other suggestion I have is simply to read back through it and change some of the "tenses" of the words such as was/were and is/are....small things that can be stumbling blocks to certain folks out here! :-)
Finally, may YOUR blessing reach out and truly bless countless of those around you both in your life's circle and beyond, for that is truly the business of the Holy Spirit!
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much for the very lovely review and very helpful comments! May you be blessed today! love, Teri
Comment from friartuck
It is near impossible to really describe what an encounter with Him really feels like, and everyone I know who has tried to do that does it differently. But they all have this in common - it's real!
Thank you for sharing that!
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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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It is near impossible to really describe what an encounter with Him really feels like, and everyone I know who has tried to do that does it differently. But they all have this in common - it's real!
Thank you for sharing that!
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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Thank you my friend for the very lovely review and comments. You are so right my friend. It is a one on one experience! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse poem about the Holy Spirit that is within us and guide us on the path to eternal life. Only when we cherish the Holy spirit in ourselves we can see and hear God's voice clearly.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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A very well-written free verse poem about the Holy Spirit that is within us and guide us on the path to eternal life. Only when we cherish the Holy spirit in ourselves we can see and hear God's voice clearly.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much my sweet friend for the lovely and so very true comments! Thank you for the lovely six stars too! love, Teri
