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Comment from nomi338
Of course, what else would some one who eats chicken taste like but chicken? You are after all, what you eat. If you eat chicken, you then become chicken, right? If that is truly the case, then what is a condor?
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2018
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Of course, what else would some one who eats chicken taste like but chicken? You are after all, what you eat. If you eat chicken, you then become chicken, right? If that is truly the case, then what is a condor?
Comment Written 06-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2018
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A big chicken, I guess. Don?t say that to his face though.
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Never, I would never get that close
Comment from damommy
Great play on words. Also good alliteration.
Buzzards play a big part in keeping things clean, but they have a bad reputation which is unfair. In their way, they are beautiful birds, too.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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Great play on words. Also good alliteration.
Buzzards play a big part in keeping things clean, but they have a bad reputation which is unfair. In their way, they are beautiful birds, too.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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Love buzzards.
Comment from judiverse
Isn't everything supposed to taste like chicken? My mother-in-law used to try to pass of tofu as chicken. What a story in this. Some condors just don't appreciate the finer things. Love your play on the word "peckish." Cleverly done. You don't need the comma after Coco. Great names. judi
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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Isn't everything supposed to taste like chicken? My mother-in-law used to try to pass of tofu as chicken. What a story in this. Some condors just don't appreciate the finer things. Love your play on the word "peckish." Cleverly done. You don't need the comma after Coco. Great names. judi
Comment Written 02-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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I was going to say it was how "Coco," spelled her name. One of my son's student's name is (ladasha), spelled L A - A H. True story.
Comment from lyenochka
Well, you taught me a new word, "peckish" which works especially well if you happen to be a bird. Humorous and unexpected pivotal middle line which is what one would expect in a tanka.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
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Well, you taught me a new word, "peckish" which works especially well if you happen to be a bird. Humorous and unexpected pivotal middle line which is what one would expect in a tanka.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
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Well, that's a switch. Thanks for giving this a look.
Comment from Gloria ....
Pranka now that IS fun. A new form is it then? If so, I love it, Bill.
I can't imagine one would be too particular about their meal if they're peckish.
Looking forward to your next pranka. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
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Pranka now that IS fun. A new form is it then? If so, I love it, Bill.
I can't imagine one would be too particular about their meal if they're peckish.
Looking forward to your next pranka. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 01-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
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I've been calling them that because I use the tanka form, but typically make them funny and otherwise don't keep any proper tanka discipline. Thanks for giving this a look.
