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Hate is such a little word35 total reviews
Comment from Rasmine
Awesome little poem! I hope you do well in this contest. Does this let past winners in it? Okay, answered my own question. :P
Have a great weekend. :)
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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Awesome little poem! I hope you do well in this contest. Does this let past winners in it? Okay, answered my own question. :P
Have a great weekend. :)
Comment Written 02-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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many thanks
Comment from Writeling
I like the enigmatic image to illustrate your words and the reduction in font size of 'hate' gives the fighting punch brought on by LOVE. Very clever.
With best wishes, Writeling
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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I like the enigmatic image to illustrate your words and the reduction in font size of 'hate' gives the fighting punch brought on by LOVE. Very clever.
With best wishes, Writeling
Comment Written 02-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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many thanks
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Awesome! I am so excited to see an author write such a great entry for their first contest. This is a powerful message that you've chosen. Good luck to you in your first contest. :)
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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Awesome! I am so excited to see an author write such a great entry for their first contest. This is a powerful message that you've chosen. Good luck to you in your first contest. :)
Comment Written 01-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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many thanks
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This appears to fit the rules of an antonym poem. Your 2 word choices are expressed well. Good job on your picture choice. Thanks for sharing & best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
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This appears to fit the rules of an antonym poem. Your 2 word choices are expressed well. Good job on your picture choice. Thanks for sharing & best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 01-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
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many thanks
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your use of the antonyms in this tiny poem. You make a compelling statement and reinforce it well with the dramatic artwork. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
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I admired your use of the antonyms in this tiny poem. You make a compelling statement and reinforce it well with the dramatic artwork. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
Comment Written 01-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
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many thanks
Comment from William Ross
Very good, yes love can conquer hate, we have to teach world leaders that, they start everything. Good luck on the first win contest and have a wonderful day.
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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
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Very good, yes love can conquer hate, we have to teach world leaders that, they start everything. Good luck on the first win contest and have a wonderful day.
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Comment Written 01-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
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many thanks, I will have to try harder to get that 5th star any help would be much appreciated
Comment from Ogden
Hi, welcome to FanStory! You have chosen excellent antonyms, but I suggest you give more thought to the words connecting them. You should try to come up with something insightful, or conclusive.
You want the reader to be impressed with what you've written.
Don (aka Ogden)
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
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Hi, welcome to FanStory! You have chosen excellent antonyms, but I suggest you give more thought to the words connecting them. You should try to come up with something insightful, or conclusive.
You want the reader to be impressed with what you've written.
Don (aka Ogden)
Comment Written 01-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
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many thanks
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You're very welcome.
Comment from aanneee
Your picture choice and your words for the My First Win! contest are a good compliment to each and say a lot. I enjoyed popping in here today and I wish you luck in the contest, but win or lose this is a winner...Dinah
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
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Your picture choice and your words for the My First Win! contest are a good compliment to each and say a lot. I enjoyed popping in here today and I wish you luck in the contest, but win or lose this is a winner...Dinah
Comment Written 01-Jun-2018
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many thanks
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written antonym poem. Love and hate are very different emotions but they can be also too close to each other for our own comfort. Sometimes love turns to hate when people treat us badly.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
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A very well-written antonym poem. Love and hate are very different emotions but they can be also too close to each other for our own comfort. Sometimes love turns to hate when people treat us badly.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
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many thanks
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks poet believes love has enormous power which cannot be seen but can conquer hate that is such a little human action before love; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
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This speaks poet believes love has enormous power which cannot be seen but can conquer hate that is such a little human action before love; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 01-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
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many thanks
