Advice From a Mermaid
Melvin and Princess are at it again15 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
Of dear another two michevious cats up to no good! Giving advice really!i guess since Dawns cat write a Coloumbus they can have their own way to do things too.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Of dear another two michevious cats up to no good! Giving advice really!i guess since Dawns cat write a Coloumbus they can have their own way to do things too.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
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Comment from judiverse
When their human's away, the cats will play. This is one post I really wanted to read today, and I'm in a snit, but this is cute. The advice Princess has the mermaid give is really funny. I especially enjoyed the advice she gave to the 47 year old man who was still living at home. Melvin is funny when he tries to set her straight. Maybe a mermaid isn't out to give advice. Look out! Princess has plans for the mermaid to go into action again when their human isn't around. Great fun, and you do a perfect job of keeping this in present tense, which sounds just right. judi
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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When their human's away, the cats will play. This is one post I really wanted to read today, and I'm in a snit, but this is cute. The advice Princess has the mermaid give is really funny. I especially enjoyed the advice she gave to the 47 year old man who was still living at home. Melvin is funny when he tries to set her straight. Maybe a mermaid isn't out to give advice. Look out! Princess has plans for the mermaid to go into action again when their human isn't around. Great fun, and you do a perfect job of keeping this in present tense, which sounds just right. judi
Comment Written 15-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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I am trying to remember to keep the writing in the present tense. Thanks for reading about these two felines, I can't seem to keep away from them. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
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Hi, Elaine. You're welcome. I certainly love those creative kitties. judi
Comment from Gert sherwood
Well mermaids
no way is your animation running wild with your two cats Princess and Melvin especially when they are also giving their humorous cat thoughts along with Mermaids advise
Give us more.
Gert
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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Well mermaids
no way is your animation running wild with your two cats Princess and Melvin especially when they are also giving their humorous cat thoughts along with Mermaids advise
Give us more.
Gert
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Comment Written 15-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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More to come, I am stuck on these two felines. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from brenda faye curtis
This adorable story leads me to the conclusion that the advice of these two cats isn't any worse than some goofy advice I've heard on talk shows. In fact, it might be a bit better!
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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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This adorable story leads me to the conclusion that the advice of these two cats isn't any worse than some goofy advice I've heard on talk shows. In fact, it might be a bit better!
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Comment Written 15-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Hahahaha! Love your review! Thanks so much. Elaine
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You're very welcome! :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I like the photo.
-The story is great, and so believable.
-The dialogue between the cats captures the
reader's attention so well.
-After their discussion back and forth,
you take the reader back to reality of the
cat world very well.
-I have been away from FS for a while because of
health reasons, and I am very glad I read your story.
-I will have a new poem this weekend, and hope you
stop by to review it, mermaids.
~Pam
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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-I like the photo.
-The story is great, and so believable.
-The dialogue between the cats captures the
reader's attention so well.
-After their discussion back and forth,
you take the reader back to reality of the
cat world very well.
-I have been away from FS for a while because of
health reasons, and I am very glad I read your story.
-I will have a new poem this weekend, and hope you
stop by to review it, mermaids.
~Pam
Comment Written 15-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Thanks again for a wonderful review. Elaine
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You are welcome, Elaine.
