Advice From a Mermaid
Melvin and Princess are at it again15 total reviews
Comment from Possummagic
What a great imagination you have. I enjoyed your choice of characters and their means of interacting. I wonder what my furry friends get up to when they are left alone in the house.PM
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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What a great imagination you have. I enjoyed your choice of characters and their means of interacting. I wonder what my furry friends get up to when they are left alone in the house.PM
Comment Written 23-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Thanks for reading and enjoying. I appreciate your positive comments. Elaine
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You are most welcome. PM
Comment from Sallyo
Love Melvin and Princess. I foresee a whole book of Melvin and Princess tales... um, tails... if there's not one already! Cats at a computer open the door for all sorts of fun. Well written, funny and ideal for a smile over a cuppa.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Love Melvin and Princess. I foresee a whole book of Melvin and Princess tales... um, tails... if there's not one already! Cats at a computer open the door for all sorts of fun. Well written, funny and ideal for a smile over a cuppa.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Yes, a book is in the future and these two felines are full of adventures. Thanks for your wonderful review. Elaine
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Oh, good!
Comment from Insignificant Weed
Oh, yes! This is too cute. Now you got me going with mischievous tricks these cats can play. And they are so coy. The psychotherapy sessions are hilarious. You never know what kind of animal is on the other computer or if it's a bot! I am rating this five stars because of the coherence and development of this story. I would just like to note one minor grammar error: "His human parents probably wear depends, they do not use the litter." you have a comma splice here -you are joining two sentences with a comma - the punctuation needed is a semi-colon. It should read: His human parents probably wear depends; they do not use the litter. Easy fix. Thanks for sharing. Love those cats! Just my style.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Oh, yes! This is too cute. Now you got me going with mischievous tricks these cats can play. And they are so coy. The psychotherapy sessions are hilarious. You never know what kind of animal is on the other computer or if it's a bot! I am rating this five stars because of the coherence and development of this story. I would just like to note one minor grammar error: "His human parents probably wear depends, they do not use the litter." you have a comma splice here -you are joining two sentences with a comma - the punctuation needed is a semi-colon. It should read: His human parents probably wear depends; they do not use the litter. Easy fix. Thanks for sharing. Love those cats! Just my style.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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I need all the grammar help I can get. Thanks so much for your suggestion. I appreciate your positive comments. Elaine
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Love those cats! and insignificant weeds (dandelions)
Comment from Ricky1024
Naughty Kitties!
I like,This!
Smart and creative!
It was well written with great theme and imagery and deep abounding.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content and Objective Content were perfect aligned perfectly with Descriptive Measures.
Ricky
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Naughty Kitties!
I like,This!
Smart and creative!
It was well written with great theme and imagery and deep abounding.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content and Objective Content were perfect aligned perfectly with Descriptive Measures.
Ricky
Comment Written 22-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Thanks for a great review, my friend. Elaine
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
LOL! When their owner is away, they will play with the mermaid program again, giving bad advice. But then, anyone who takes the advice from a cat-drawn mermaid deserves what he gets. :)
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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LOL! When their owner is away, they will play with the mermaid program again, giving bad advice. But then, anyone who takes the advice from a cat-drawn mermaid deserves what he gets. :)
Comment Written 17-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Hahaha...Love your review. Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, what a cute story that would appeal to quite a young audience and upward. I think you are onto a good device for creating more of these. You have a platform for humor with the cats giving the advice, it gets all muddled up and is open to interpretation. I thought that was clever and I liked the light conflict between the two characters, Melvin and Princess. A good dynamic as they are so opposite.
I thoroughly enjoyed your easy to read story. No errors that I noticed and it is a work I'd recommend, cheers, Ana.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Hello, what a cute story that would appeal to quite a young audience and upward. I think you are onto a good device for creating more of these. You have a platform for humor with the cats giving the advice, it gets all muddled up and is open to interpretation. I thought that was clever and I liked the light conflict between the two characters, Melvin and Princess. A good dynamic as they are so opposite.
I thoroughly enjoyed your easy to read story. No errors that I noticed and it is a work I'd recommend, cheers, Ana.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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I am honored by your thoughtful review. Thanks for taking time to read about these two felines. More adventures to come. Elaine
Comment from meeshu
hahaha, it is great to see Melvin and Princess again! I see they are up to no good as usual. they have more fun with a computer than I do. very well done, Merm........meeshu
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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hahaha, it is great to see Melvin and Princess again! I see they are up to no good as usual. they have more fun with a computer than I do. very well done, Merm........meeshu
Comment Written 16-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Thanks for continuing to read about these two felines. I appreciate your thoughtful review. Elaine
Comment from Sasha
I got a real kick out of this one. They are very clever cats but clearly not qualified to be giving advice to humans. But something tells me they will be giving out more advice
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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I got a real kick out of this one. They are very clever cats but clearly not qualified to be giving advice to humans. But something tells me they will be giving out more advice
Comment Written 16-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Yeah...I think Melvin and Princess will be back at the computer leading people down the wrong path. Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
You know me and cats, and I see a future career for these two little bundles of energy whose imagination matches Mommys. Love the idea and the excellent story
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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You know me and cats, and I see a future career for these two little bundles of energy whose imagination matches Mommys. Love the idea and the excellent story
Comment Written 16-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Love your review, thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from Aussie
On your profile you don't say 'my muse.' you do say inspiration comes from many places; I heartily agree with you. No muses for me. Now, the story/script. I love the way you reversed the situation with the cats talking and punching computer keys. Loads of fun, most enjoyable. From one cat lover to another. Something fishy about this tale? XXK.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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On your profile you don't say 'my muse.' you do say inspiration comes from many places; I heartily agree with you. No muses for me. Now, the story/script. I love the way you reversed the situation with the cats talking and punching computer keys. Loads of fun, most enjoyable. From one cat lover to another. Something fishy about this tale? XXK.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Thanks again for a wonderful review. Elaine
