Spread Your Wings
Keep Dreaming...5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, Spread Your Wings, follows the format and reminds us that we all have a goal. Remembering what it is, and keeping the motivation high is key to success.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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This 1-6-1, Spread Your Wings, follows the format and reminds us that we all have a goal. Remembering what it is, and keeping the motivation high is key to success.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018
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Thanks so much for this nice review.
Comment from Judvan2
I loved your little poem. Congratulations on your win. You earned it. Its short sweet and the picture accents it nicely. A feel good addition to my day! Judy
reply by the author on 31-May-2018
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I loved your little poem. Congratulations on your win. You earned it. Its short sweet and the picture accents it nicely. A feel good addition to my day! Judy
Comment Written 31-May-2018
reply by the author on 31-May-2018
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Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from mrdmaria
Beautiful work and a beautiful message! The lines are very well crafted with simple, easily flowing words that gets the message right through the reader. Just wow. I hope u win the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
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Beautiful work and a beautiful message! The lines are very well crafted with simple, easily flowing words that gets the message right through the reader. Just wow. I hope u win the contest.
Comment Written 30-May-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem, and for the six stars. It made my day :)
Comment from Mary Jane Y
Very good use of the rules for this poem! So much was said in 8 little words!
Well done and the picture you added was perfect!! Keep up your writing and fly.
reply by the author on 29-May-2018
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Very good use of the rules for this poem! So much was said in 8 little words!
Well done and the picture you added was perfect!! Keep up your writing and fly.
Comment Written 28-May-2018
reply by the author on 29-May-2018
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Thank you for this kind review.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
What a sweet picture you have chosen. This makes me think of the poem by Langston Hughes, Hold Fast to Dreams. The reader needs to heed your cautionary tale here which is delivered in soft tones. But we know it carries great weight. There's also two songs I'm reminded of with the words "spread your wing and fly" also " I can spread my wings and fly." Your poem is universal, anyone can relate to it. Well written.
reply by the author on 28-May-2018
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What a sweet picture you have chosen. This makes me think of the poem by Langston Hughes, Hold Fast to Dreams. The reader needs to heed your cautionary tale here which is delivered in soft tones. But we know it carries great weight. There's also two songs I'm reminded of with the words "spread your wing and fly" also " I can spread my wings and fly." Your poem is universal, anyone can relate to it. Well written.
Comment Written 28-May-2018
reply by the author on 28-May-2018
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Thank you. I know its a message that's been done before, it's just very relatable to what's going on in my life now. :)
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All writing is archetypal, nothing any of us write is new. We only write what needs to be written at the moment
I did a meditation dialogue with Jim Croce...I saw him a prophet
Me: Why did you have to die so young-you can't tell me you had nothing else to say or share with us?
Jim: I had said it all-It was said over two thousand years ago in a man's life and complete self-emptying. There's no more to say, only new ways of saying it. And that is up to you. So love life-love people-love the present moment and try to show people how special and how lovable they are.
