Granny's Revenge
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Keys to the City"Losing everything Granny is out for revenge.
8 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Hi Misty, so Granny is free to go on and kill more drunks!? I love it. Your story is just too funny. It is well written and well told and I look forward to read the continuation. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 29-May-2018
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Hi Misty, so Granny is free to go on and kill more drunks!? I love it. Your story is just too funny. It is well written and well told and I look forward to read the continuation. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 29-May-2018
reply by the author on 29-May-2018
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Thank you so much for your great review, I'm glad you're enjoying it. I was so afraid people wouldn't like it because it's so far from the norm.
Thank you again for your review and all your support it means a lot to me, take care.
Comment from BeasPeas
Another fun read that brought a smile. You've come up with a good premise for your character who takes delight in killing drunks for the death of her grandson. Marilyn
reply by the author on 29-May-2018
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Another fun read that brought a smile. You've come up with a good premise for your character who takes delight in killing drunks for the death of her grandson. Marilyn
Comment Written 28-May-2018
reply by the author on 29-May-2018
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Thank you so much for your lovely review and all your kind words. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. I wasn't sure how well the idea would do straying so far from the beaten path.
Thank you again for your great review, take care.
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I always think it's good to go where the story takes us.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Mistydawn
What a switch in this fun chapter that Granny is a hero for attaching the Nanny Bandit believing she isn't suspected of the past killings.
And how how Granny is still thinking of going on her rampage to get her revenge by killing drunks
Really good writing
Gert
reply by the author on 29-May-2018
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Hello Mistydawn
What a switch in this fun chapter that Granny is a hero for attaching the Nanny Bandit believing she isn't suspected of the past killings.
And how how Granny is still thinking of going on her rampage to get her revenge by killing drunks
Really good writing
Gert
Comment Written 28-May-2018
reply by the author on 29-May-2018
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Thank you so much for your great review and encouraging words. The award sure took Granny by surprise and she had her moment in the limelight the way she always dreamed. Granny is just biding her time until she can safely kill again lol.
Thank you so much for all your support and friendship it means a lot to me, take care.
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You are welcome Misty
Gert
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Wow, that was a lucky coincidence. Except the man she attacked can't be the killer, because SHE is. Poor guy. So she's free to killl drunks again. I say "Go, Granny. Society is better off without the smelly losers."
reply by the author on 28-May-2018
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Wow, that was a lucky coincidence. Except the man she attacked can't be the killer, because SHE is. Poor guy. So she's free to killl drunks again. I say "Go, Granny. Society is better off without the smelly losers."
Comment Written 28-May-2018
reply by the author on 28-May-2018
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Thank you so much for your great review. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. Yep, she is free to kill again only this time she's going to be careful. Fatalities from drunk drivers are astronomical. Sad but true.
Thank you again for all your support it means a lot to me, take care.
Comment from robyn corum
MD,
Funny -- a granny assassin? I don't remember ever reading a story like that before! hahahaha! This is an intriguing premise and I imagine your regular readers are getting a hoot out of it. hahaha!
Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 28-May-2018
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MD,
Funny -- a granny assassin? I don't remember ever reading a story like that before! hahahaha! This is an intriguing premise and I imagine your regular readers are getting a hoot out of it. hahaha!
Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 28-May-2018
reply by the author on 28-May-2018
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Thank you so much for your review. Granny is quite a character and her weapon of choice is just as unique. Her cane shoots out bullet shaped ice cubes into her victims' carotid artery. They bleed out and only a small amount of water is left behind. Believe it or not, it's all very plausible.
Thank you again for taking the time to read my unusual story, Take care.
Comment from giraffmang
Well, well, Granny turns out a hero and a killer. Tomato - tomahto...lol
"Is something wrong, doctor," she asks - question mark needed here.
and congratulate you," The Police Chief says - the.
as she locks the wheelchair breaks. - brakes.
"How did you do it?" A reporter asks - a.
"What's crazy, Rachel." - question mark needed.
reply by the author on 28-May-2018
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Well, well, Granny turns out a hero and a killer. Tomato - tomahto...lol
"Is something wrong, doctor," she asks - question mark needed here.
and congratulate you," The Police Chief says - the.
as she locks the wheelchair breaks. - brakes.
"How did you do it?" A reporter asks - a.
"What's crazy, Rachel." - question mark needed.
Comment Written 28-May-2018
reply by the author on 28-May-2018
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Thank you so much for your great five star and all your helpful suggestions. The whole ordeal was quite a shock to Granny, lol.
Thank you again for all your help and support it's always greatly appreciated.
Comment from royowen
Granny hasn't lost any of her vim and vigour, her hatred for drunks whether driving or not is still as passionate and as deep rooted as ever. Instead of being arrested for the crime she did on the last drunk she flattened, she's hailed as a hero, right in front of the Mayor, the chief of police, and Joe. Although Rachel has a spark of suspicion. Well done, your story's flowing well
reply by the author on 28-May-2018
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Granny hasn't lost any of her vim and vigour, her hatred for drunks whether driving or not is still as passionate and as deep rooted as ever. Instead of being arrested for the crime she did on the last drunk she flattened, she's hailed as a hero, right in front of the Mayor, the chief of police, and Joe. Although Rachel has a spark of suspicion. Well done, your story's flowing well
Comment Written 28-May-2018
reply by the author on 28-May-2018
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Thank you so much for your lovely review and your kind words. Rachel keeps solving cases because the guys miss the obvious clues. Sometimes the most obvious are the hardest to find. Thank you again for all your support and great reviews, they mean a lot to me, take care.
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Most welcome
Comment from apky
I laughed nearly throughout this post, Misty. You did this one with genius humour. First Gran reminiscing, then Gran on the lawyer's arms, and finally Rachel and her team at the station - too funny.
In the last paragraph I was back biting my nails hoping nothing goes wrong for Gran, not just yet.... and up comes the cop car and I could breathe out again.
Simply great.
but after that show, I'd say I missed my calling, wouldn't you? ~ I had to really roar at this. Heavens, Gran, you're a trip!
reply by the author on 28-May-2018
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I laughed nearly throughout this post, Misty. You did this one with genius humour. First Gran reminiscing, then Gran on the lawyer's arms, and finally Rachel and her team at the station - too funny.
In the last paragraph I was back biting my nails hoping nothing goes wrong for Gran, not just yet.... and up comes the cop car and I could breathe out again.
Simply great.
but after that show, I'd say I missed my calling, wouldn't you? ~ I had to really roar at this. Heavens, Gran, you're a trip!
Comment Written 28-May-2018
reply by the author on 28-May-2018
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Thank you so much for your fantastic review I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Granny is definitely quite a character. Rachel, she's going to show them what pranking really is lol.
Thank you again for all your help, support and your wonderful reviews, they mean so much to me, take care.
