Imprisoned
Shakespearean sonnet contest entry14 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your Shakespearean Sonnet and striking artwork. Your rhymes and imagery were very effective. I particularly liked your "seed" and "metallic bars" metaphors and "ink on paper" simile. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 28-May-2018
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I admired your Shakespearean Sonnet and striking artwork. Your rhymes and imagery were very effective. I particularly liked your "seed" and "metallic bars" metaphors and "ink on paper" simile. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 28-May-2018
reply by the author on 28-May-2018
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Thank you for the great review, Joan. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your entry for the Shakespearean Sonnet contest. I found the poem to be quite lovely and haunting. It isn't difficult to imagine how love can put someone in prison.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 28-May-2018
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Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your entry for the Shakespearean Sonnet contest. I found the poem to be quite lovely and haunting. It isn't difficult to imagine how love can put someone in prison.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 27-May-2018
reply by the author on 28-May-2018
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Thank you very much. I am glad you liked it.
Comment from Mary Jane Y
Sounds like someone in love but really rather not be. I am sure that love can catch one off guard and seems to be the case in this poem. I see someone in love that has been hurt before and has no desire to Revisit that pain.
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reply by the author on 27-May-2018
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Sounds like someone in love but really rather not be. I am sure that love can catch one off guard and seems to be the case in this poem. I see someone in love that has been hurt before and has no desire to Revisit that pain.
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Comment Written 27-May-2018
reply by the author on 27-May-2018
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Yes, you have some valid points, my poet friend!
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Yes, you have a valid point, my poet friend!
Comment from Joy Graham
You pulled me into this sonnet :) That's always a sign of a good story teller. I have trouble saying, "grow'ng". No matter how many times I go back to try again, I keep slipping up. Sorry!
My favorite moment in this sonnet:
- "You wish your poet's sky was always blue" - this just sings to me and begs to be studied further.
Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
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reply by the author on 27-May-2018
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You pulled me into this sonnet :) That's always a sign of a good story teller. I have trouble saying, "grow'ng". No matter how many times I go back to try again, I keep slipping up. Sorry!
My favorite moment in this sonnet:
- "You wish your poet's sky was always blue" - this just sings to me and begs to be studied further.
Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
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Comment Written 27-May-2018
reply by the author on 27-May-2018
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Thank you for the great review, Joy. After writing your crown, you can write any sonnet now! I will ponder over that spot.
