Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Dip, This is a very well written/song you have penned. It sounds very romantic and could be sung to the lady of your choice. Very nice words you have penned. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 30-May-2018

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reply by the author on 31-May-2018

Thank you Teri much appreciated.

dip

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Waves, sounds like a wonderful song my sweet friend....
how wonderful it would be to be loved so deeply...sigh...I remember those days....and nights...when we hold each other...never to let go...very well written my sweet friend...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 27-May-2018

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reply by the author on 27-May-2018

Thanks again Linda

xxdip

reply by l.raven on 27-May-2018

soooo welcome Waves...it's catch up time again...love xxoo

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this song/poem. It definitely had a musical flow about it. Only one more week of school, so maybe I'll have more time to enjoy your talent.

 Comment Written 27-May-2018

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reply by the author on 27-May-2018

Wow thank you so much Barbara I would be rapt if you checked my port folio for other writes. I am glad you feel it could be lyrics.

dip

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi Dip,

Can just see this one, with guitar in hand and a simple little riff going down. very nice indeed. Good to see a post again too.

All the best
G

 Comment Written 27-May-2018

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reply by the author on 27-May-2018

Hi G really appreciate your review. I don't come here every day and post any more I just cannot dedicate the time to review at the moment. Things may change in the future but at the moment my visits are fleeting and irregular. Great to see you are still here.

dip