Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

hi Dip,
Nice to see you still retain the romance within your words.
Sometimes just singing or saying them provides the desired resonance,
especially if the right person is listening.
Do you have any song lyrics out there in the arena?
Good luck...and never give up.
:-) Shirley

 Comment Written 28-May-2018

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reply by the author on 28-May-2018

Hi Shirley, glad to hear from you Nah i have written many lyrics over the years and have had a few friends add music and a voice which was a buzz to hear, but nothing commercial
Thanks as always for the comments

dip

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Waves, I would love to hear your songs on the radio...
this would be a sad song...sigh...you should find a tune to read the with...love your poem/song....very well written you...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 27-May-2018

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reply by the author on 27-May-2018

So would I haha Thanks so much for your incredible support of my writes Linda it means a lot

xxdip

reply by l.raven on 27-May-2018

your sooo welcome Waves...I'll keep the radio on...love xxoo

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

You are not the first poet on this site to try putting their poems to music. I am so this will work for you. You have a very good poem. Just get the correct tune and you're set.

 Comment Written 27-May-2018

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reply by the author on 27-May-2018

Actually I have visited many of my 4500 poems again and added choruses where I felt they had potential song lyrics.
Thank you for your wonderful encouragement of my work Barbara, much appreciated.

dip

Comment from Nicole Wright

Excellent

Speaking to me today with these words you have written. It's quite beautiful. It truly is a sad song and one that would touch many. There is nothing like feeling completely abandoned by the one you love most. From tragedy come great works.of art.

 Comment Written 27-May-2018

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reply by the author on 27-May-2018

Thank you so much Nicole much appreciated

dip