Comment from Boogienights

Exceptional

It's wonderful to find joy in something like you have. I find joy in writing, especially my Roberts adventures series( children's poems ). I like this poem very much, but don't ever wish to die...you are an intrigal part of the universe. Your words bring joy to people.

 Comment Written 27-May-2018

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reply by the author on 27-May-2018

thanks for your review, Ine. have a nice week.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Ine, fly like an eagle sweet girl...love life for all you can get from it...I love your poem you...and love you leaping picture...stay cool...very well written...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 27-May-2018

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reply by the author on 27-May-2018

Thanks for your review, In. Have a nice week.

reply by l.raven on 27-May-2018

your so welcome you...love xxoo

Comment from Mastery

Exceptional

Hi, Ine. So good to read your writing again. This Free Verse is a wonderful entry for te contest. I especially liked this stanza:

"sing on the rhythm of the leaps
high and low, but completely in tune.
I like both singing and the leaps.
I hope all of you love it too
and give me many sixes
as proof of your appreciation
and of course your ever-lasting love.

Bravo! Bob

 Comment Written 27-May-2018

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reply by the author on 27-May-2018

Thanks for your review, In. Have a nice week.

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

Hey... Robina... I love to leap... I was a ballerina for 12 years. So I will join you in your verse and now there is two. Yours, Diana

I sing on the rhythm of the leaps
high and low, but completely in tune.
I like both singing and the leaps.
I hope all of you love it too

 Comment Written 27-May-2018

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reply by the author on 27-May-2018

Thanks for your review, In. Have a nice week.

Comment from apky

Excellent

This is very beautiful and >I love the artworkd, Robina.

I sing on the rhythm of the leaps
high and low, but completely in tune.
I like both singing and the leaps.
I hope all of you love it too
and give me many sixes
as proof of your appreciation
and of course your ever-lasting love.

 Comment Written 27-May-2018

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reply by the author on 27-May-2018

Thanks for your review, In. Have a nice week.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your free verse contest entry. Reading it made me want to leap. LOL It is a very happy poem and I wish you the best of luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 27-May-2018

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reply by the author on 27-May-2018

Thanks for your review, In. Have a nice week.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Ine, I am also one who like to feel that I could jump for joy. I have so many wonderful things in my life that I want to see yet and jump for the joy of His blessings. Patricia

 Comment Written 27-May-2018

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reply by the author on 27-May-2018

thanks for your review, Ine. have a nice week.

Comment from Dutchie

Excellent

Hi Ine. Wonderful free verse you wrote and it flows very well. O yes life has it's ups and downs, but I'm sure you will have a lot of fun this Summer. I can't sing with you, I have a voice like a frog. LOL. Well done, girl. Fia

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 Comment Written 27-May-2018

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reply by the author on 27-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and very hot Sunday. Thanks, Fia, I look forward to your stay.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Well done with this entry in this free verse poetry contest. You've do a good Job Ine. Don't jump too high, you might reach heaven, but hell's in the other direction, well done, Ine, good luck, blessings, Roy

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 Comment Written 27-May-2018

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reply by the author on 27-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and very hot Sunday.

reply by royowen on 27-May-2018

Most welcomeb