Enough is Enough
A man at the end of his ropes2 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I really liked this post, but I am sure a man who's in this mental state would not say, "I am" he would say, "I'm" You used I am many times.
He comes to a point he can't take it anymore and drives his car into a brick wall and the note in the glove compartment says "I love you all, but enough is enough." ( you need a comma after anymore and you need a comma after says)
reply by the author on 27-May-2018
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I really liked this post, but I am sure a man who's in this mental state would not say, "I am" he would say, "I'm" You used I am many times.
He comes to a point he can't take it anymore and drives his car into a brick wall and the note in the glove compartment says "I love you all, but enough is enough." ( you need a comma after anymore and you need a comma after says)
Comment Written 26-May-2018
reply by the author on 27-May-2018
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Thank you I always like your reviews because you give me an honest one.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the man emotionally overpowered, his wife earn more doing a full-time job; he failed to get a full-time job instead of a part-time, so he committed suicide; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 27-May-2018
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This speaks the man emotionally overpowered, his wife earn more doing a full-time job; he failed to get a full-time job instead of a part-time, so he committed suicide; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 26-May-2018
reply by the author on 27-May-2018
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Thank you so much,
