Comment from apky

Excellent

This was a fun read.

I wondered why you started with 7:00 a.m. and then went back to 6:30 a.m. It would look better chronologically done.

The bit about watering the garden, and then it rains, gave this a nice authentic touch.

 Comment Written 25-May-2018

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reply by the author on 26-May-2018

Dear Friend, thank you for your review and the five stars. Yes, you are right about the times. I've fixed it so it looks better.
I don't usually go in for very short competition entries, but this seemed to be a "piece of cake" so I did it. and I'm rather pleased with the result. Thanks again cheers Cass

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks about a typical day in author's state of living, wake up, take one medicine for Parkinsons and other antidepressant, coffee, corn thins, lunch, and; day ends; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 25-May-2018

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reply by the author on 26-May-2018

Dear Friend, thank you for your review and the five stars .cheers Cass

Comment from bob cullen

Excellent

I think we can all relate to this one hundred worder. I guess most women would suggest this is a typical housewife's day whereas we poor men only have to suffer similar demands from a standover merchant called the Boss. Life really can be a bitch, but when you consider the alternative, death I guess life is pretty good.
This is well written

 Comment Written 25-May-2018

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reply by the author on 26-May-2018

Dear Bob, thank you for your review and the five stars. As one who would qualify for the rank of "Boss" I suggest you take a long careful look at "the alternative" and keep going for as long as you can. "The standover merchant" will make your life miserable whether you like it or not, So What the Heck? Pull a swifty on her and make her laugh. Or cry and then comfort her.
My favorite trick from my best beloved was when he'd buy my favorite chocolates and feed them to me one by one. Life isn't a bitch all the time. cheers Cass