Deadly Date - Part 2
The aftermath of a meal gone wrong12 total reviews
Comment from Cybertron1986
Original and genuinely good comedy story. I was entertained from the beginning, and to the humorous ending of, "a weak sense of smell." Everything tied in perfectly with good pacing. Despite a few grammar mishaps, and extra wording (that can be easily fixed) the story does achieve a high level of appeal and entertainment for the reader. Well done!
reply by the author on 26-May-2018
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Original and genuinely good comedy story. I was entertained from the beginning, and to the humorous ending of, "a weak sense of smell." Everything tied in perfectly with good pacing. Despite a few grammar mishaps, and extra wording (that can be easily fixed) the story does achieve a high level of appeal and entertainment for the reader. Well done!
Comment Written 26-May-2018
reply by the author on 26-May-2018
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Thank so much Cybertron. It was a fun story to write. I have been working on a book and needed something funny for a change and a little break. Dragons are not all they are cracked up to be. Thank you so much again and for the 6stars. Rox
Comment from Swampfox1
That is so absolutely disgusting were thoughts came to mind as I read through your story but it is a humor story but still not quite the things people want to read about this is worse than dirty words , but even dirty words are humorous at times, but not all the time, it depends on the company you are with, Thanks for sharing have a nice weekend
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reply by the author on 26-May-2018
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That is so absolutely disgusting were thoughts came to mind as I read through your story but it is a humor story but still not quite the things people want to read about this is worse than dirty words , but even dirty words are humorous at times, but not all the time, it depends on the company you are with, Thanks for sharing have a nice weekend
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Comment Written 26-May-2018
reply by the author on 26-May-2018
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Sorry Swampy, don't want anyone to be disgusted. I have a rather sick sense of humor and find these kind of story really funny. Maybe I just need therapy. =} Hope you have a good weekend and thanks for the read, review and stars. Rox
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You're welcome
