Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks the fate as Barb got the job working at Marion's, she was allowed to model a some of the clothes while working, but that devastated her when her boss had to fire her if she got married; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 25-May-2018

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reply by the author on 26-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review.

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

well that was quick. I'm sorry but one hundred words is just not sufficient. Barb's got a big decision to make. I think I know what she is going to do. fine story, Maria.......meeshu

 Comment Written 25-May-2018

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reply by the author on 26-May-2018

Thanks so much for reading.

Comment from apky

Excellent

I know the story was to be one hundred words. But I enjoyed it so much and was getting into it when it suddenly----ended! I guess that's my romantic heart, always.

Excellent story.

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 Comment Written 25-May-2018

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reply by the author on 26-May-2018

There's more coming, so don't worry.
Thanks for reading.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi MJ,

Technically spot on once again. ditto for the word count. Could this be some of the root of resentment? nice back story for Barb.

G

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 Comment Written 25-May-2018

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reply by the author on 26-May-2018

Some of it, but I think she carries it in her blood.
Thanks for reading, Gareth.