Maze
Getting out of the maze23 total reviews
Comment from aanneee
The picture is certainly a super pull-in to your words. I enjoyed reading this from you, A maze can be such a scary place too many wrong turns and no way to correct them especially when fear becomes the host. Thank you for this one - Dinah
reply by the author on 26-May-2018
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The picture is certainly a super pull-in to your words. I enjoyed reading this from you, A maze can be such a scary place too many wrong turns and no way to correct them especially when fear becomes the host. Thank you for this one - Dinah
Comment Written 25-May-2018
reply by the author on 26-May-2018
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Thank you Dinah for your wonderful review and excellent rating
Comment from Artasylum
The blue gate sound so soothing a spiritual retreat somewhere above the frey... somewhere above the clouds... landing in peace devoid of pain and you welcome that day. yours, di
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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The blue gate sound so soothing a spiritual retreat somewhere above the frey... somewhere above the clouds... landing in peace devoid of pain and you welcome that day. yours, di
Comment Written 25-May-2018
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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Thank you Diana for your wonderful review and excellent rating
Comment from kiwijenny
Dare I say it...this is aMAZE-ing! I have often felt this way..when there is a fork in the road and you have to make a decision that's life changing. I wonder if I can find the right gate...happens to us all. You've captured the human condition in a unique way
God bless
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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Dare I say it...this is aMAZE-ing! I have often felt this way..when there is a fork in the road and you have to make a decision that's life changing. I wonder if I can find the right gate...happens to us all. You've captured the human condition in a unique way
God bless
Comment Written 25-May-2018
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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Thank kiwijenny for your delightful review and excellent rating
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Pam, a very well written poem in aabb form and a good use of metaphor throughout. Your final couplet sounds ominous. '
Won't have to return to all of my strife.
I'm out of the maze that people call life'...... sounds like the grim reaper called so I know this is not biographical, LOL. Very well written with a smooth flow. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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Hi Pam, a very well written poem in aabb form and a good use of metaphor throughout. Your final couplet sounds ominous. '
Won't have to return to all of my strife.
I'm out of the maze that people call life'...... sounds like the grim reaper called so I know this is not biographical, LOL. Very well written with a smooth flow. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 25-May-2018
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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Lol. Dorothy. No it is not autobiographical. Just a statement on the human condition Thank you for your wonderful review and five star rating
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a striking and relevant poem, which in some measure, includes us all. The rhyme and rhythm are even and unforced and move smoothly from stanza to stanza, in well constructed, fluid structure and beautiful presentation. The image represents the verse perfectly...
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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In my opinion, a striking and relevant poem, which in some measure, includes us all. The rhyme and rhythm are even and unforced and move smoothly from stanza to stanza, in well constructed, fluid structure and beautiful presentation. The image represents the verse perfectly...
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thank you evesayshi for your lovely review and five star rating. Nice to meet you!
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You are very welcome, Pam, and a pleasure to meet you and read your relevant words...Eve
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent metaphor for life, Pam. Your artwork attachment definitely sets up a claustrophobic feeling, at least for me it does.
Another nicely rhymed and metred poem from you quill.
You write em up good.
Gloria
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Excellent metaphor for life, Pam. Your artwork attachment definitely sets up a claustrophobic feeling, at least for me it does.
Another nicely rhymed and metred poem from you quill.
You write em up good.
Gloria
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thank you Gloria for your thoughtful review and five star rating. Your stuff is the best
Comment from Monica L. Moraca
A beautiful poem. I love the way you incorporated heaven in the second stanza, freed of pain and disease and finally peace. Life is definitely a maze, and if we don't choose our words and actions carefully, we might not never be freed.
Thank you for sharing! It was a pleasure to read it!
All the best,
Monica
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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A beautiful poem. I love the way you incorporated heaven in the second stanza, freed of pain and disease and finally peace. Life is definitely a maze, and if we don't choose our words and actions carefully, we might not never be freed.
Thank you for sharing! It was a pleasure to read it!
All the best,
Monica
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thank you Monica for your wonderful review and excellent rating
Comment from Air Spirit
I really, really like this poem.. I love the metaphor you assign to mazes, as being our lives...we each our on a journey, most of us, who don't even know where we are going a great deal of the time..we get lost,make the wrong turn, have trouble navigating through life in general.. and how the only freedom, is when we leave this thing called 'Life.' How then, peace, serenity and love will envelop and surround you - and never have to traverse a maze again... beautifully done.. love the allegorical use of the maze to illustrate life, death, and ultimately to rebirth..
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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I really, really like this poem.. I love the metaphor you assign to mazes, as being our lives...we each our on a journey, most of us, who don't even know where we are going a great deal of the time..we get lost,make the wrong turn, have trouble navigating through life in general.. and how the only freedom, is when we leave this thing called 'Life.' How then, peace, serenity and love will envelop and surround you - and never have to traverse a maze again... beautifully done.. love the allegorical use of the maze to illustrate life, death, and ultimately to rebirth..
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thank you Kindred Spirit and Cynthia too for your wonderful review and excellent rating
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Your lovely verse is well rhymed and well written.
I like that it speaks of the maze of life with many turns along the way.
And yes, there is only one way out.
Sharon
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Your lovely verse is well rhymed and well written.
I like that it speaks of the maze of life with many turns along the way.
And yes, there is only one way out.
Sharon
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thank you Sharon for your lovely review and excellent rating
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
The tale told within the lines of your poem is a great way to describe the path we take through life. Are we on the right road? Why is this roadblock in our way? If there is only one way out of the maze, why is it so hard to find?
Well done, and wonderful artwork to go with the piece,
~patty~
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Hi there;
The tale told within the lines of your poem is a great way to describe the path we take through life. Are we on the right road? Why is this roadblock in our way? If there is only one way out of the maze, why is it so hard to find?
Well done, and wonderful artwork to go with the piece,
~patty~
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thank you patty for your lovely review and five star rating
