Coy
A coy woman17 total reviews
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Pam those eight words accpmodated by the picture of the promiscuous little darling you have posted said it all and very well. I dont like to have to guess what he limited word piems are saying. And you don't have to guess at all. Great job well done Pam!
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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Pam those eight words accpmodated by the picture of the promiscuous little darling you have posted said it all and very well. I dont like to have to guess what he limited word piems are saying. And you don't have to guess at all. Great job well done Pam!
Comment Written 25-May-2018
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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Thank you Mary for your wonderful review and excellent rating Hope all is well with you. Love
Comment from Artasylum
Very Cute Pam:
The image is adorable and definitely coy. Good luck on the contest... one day I will join in the contest frenzy. Your poems are always interesting and what a range. Yours, Diana
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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Very Cute Pam:
The image is adorable and definitely coy. Good luck on the contest... one day I will join in the contest frenzy. Your poems are always interesting and what a range. Yours, Diana
Comment Written 25-May-2018
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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Thank you Diana for your delightful review and excellent rating
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Oh yeah, she's a dangerous one all right. Suck 'em in and chew them up. Perfect combination of words and picture here.
Good work
GMG
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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Hi there,
Oh yeah, she's a dangerous one all right. Suck 'em in and chew them up. Perfect combination of words and picture here.
Good work
GMG
Comment Written 25-May-2018
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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Thank you GMG for your wonderful review and excellent rating
Comment from Air Spirit
Clever, and the message comes through clearly in the few words expressed... the picture too, is perfect for the message of the poem.. Well done! :)
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Clever, and the message comes through clearly in the few words expressed... the picture too, is perfect for the message of the poem.. Well done! :)
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thank you Air Spirit ( or should I say Kindrid Spirit. Actually thank you for your wonderful review and five star rating
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, obviously a fun write, clever in its presentation - the photo complements the verse perfectly and is in full compliance with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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In my opinion, obviously a fun write, clever in its presentation - the photo complements the verse perfectly and is in full compliance with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thank you evesayshi for your delightful review and five star rating
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You are indeed welcome, Pam...Eve
Comment from Michael W Hogan
Damn, Pam...sign me up! I actually laughed out loud (something I never do when sitting alone in my office) when I saw the image, then read the verse. Captivating in its simplicity; awesome in its honesty. Sweet! Michael
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Damn, Pam...sign me up! I actually laughed out loud (something I never do when sitting alone in my office) when I saw the image, then read the verse. Captivating in its simplicity; awesome in its honesty. Sweet! Michael
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thank you so much Michael for making me laugh. Thank you for your delightful review and excellent rating
Comment from royowen
What an evocative 2/4/2 entry in this poetry contest, mmh a toy boy, someone to take out of the cupboard, then when you become bored with his immaturity put him back again, heh heh, well done, good entry Pam good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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What an evocative 2/4/2 entry in this poetry contest, mmh a toy boy, someone to take out of the cupboard, then when you become bored with his immaturity put him back again, heh heh, well done, good entry Pam good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Lol Roy. I was reading this review and I did not see who wrote it until the end. I was surprised it was you. Showing a bit of humor. I really like your review. Thank you for your delightful review and five star rating
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Cut me...do I not bleed? Heh heh
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I'm just an ordinary bloke Pam, I do sympathise.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Fun. Cute. Superficial, but I guess that's the way you intended it to be. A cute photo you found on the internet. I find nothing wrong with the syllable count, so I suppose you reached your achievement. Good for you.
Take care, Jesse
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reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Fun. Cute. Superficial, but I guess that's the way you intended it to be. A cute photo you found on the internet. I find nothing wrong with the syllable count, so I suppose you reached your achievement. Good for you.
Take care, Jesse
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Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Hi, Jesse. Thank you for your wonderful review. Did you mean to mark me down a star? Was there something I need to fix? Just curious. Thank you again
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Yes. I felt the poem lacked merit for a five star review rating.
Jesse
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Ok Jesse. Thank you for your honesty. Can you tell me how I could improve?
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I suggest putting a little meat on the bones of your poem. Not all your poetry is like that one. I think you can do better than pure fluff. Even if it is just for fun.
I hope I have been helpful.
Jesse
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Ok. Thank you. I only had eight syllables to work with. That is why my shorter poems are not as good. I tend to build toward my message with each stanza. I can?t do that with only eight syllables. Contest rules first line/ 2 syllables. Second line - four syllables and third line - two syllables. Thank you again
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I understand.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
Very interesting little poem. Yes, the eight syllables are not quite enough to tell a complete story, but in choosing the right photo, you have gone a long way telling the tale of a woman posting her picture on a dating site and penning these few lines.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Hi there;
Very interesting little poem. Yes, the eight syllables are not quite enough to tell a complete story, but in choosing the right photo, you have gone a long way telling the tale of a woman posting her picture on a dating site and penning these few lines.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thank you patty for your wonderful review and five star rating
Comment from BeasPeas
LOL! Don't we all? This is a cute and clever 5-7-5 which I enjoyed reading. It's hard to come up with something meaningful in just 8 syllables, but this one did. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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LOL! Don't we all? This is a cute and clever 5-7-5 which I enjoyed reading. It's hard to come up with something meaningful in just 8 syllables, but this one did. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thank you Marilyn for your delightful review and excellent rating
