Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

Beautifully written Dan. So glad you can walk in safe secure places with your dainty fairies showing you the way. I am happy you are getting stronger according to your musical verses. Well done. I think I have read all of your poems, now! lolol liberty justice

 Comment Written 24-May-2018

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reply by the author on 25-May-2018

Thanks for the comments.

reply by Liberty Justice on 25-May-2018

Hey I think I have reviewed
ALL of your lovely poems.
How are you feeling? lolo
liberty justice

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dan,

Though I do not, for one minute, believe in fairies, I am happy to hear that you've had a great day. That makes my heart truly happy. So glad to hear!!

Some notes:
1.) Walked for two hours and fifty minutes (then)

2.) Now a ride from one (whose) shift did close

3.) While walking without limp and no pain (to) falter

Thanks, sweetie! Keep up the great work!

 Comment Written 23-May-2018

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reply by the author on 23-May-2018

Thanks for the comments.

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

well written in your sometimes rhymes style, it is very unique. good to see you up and around.....keep on trucking. good luck in contest.

 Comment Written 23-May-2018

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reply by the author on 23-May-2018

Thanks for the comments.