ALL of the sudden!
some fun for TOM15 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles Vance
I had fun reading about your thoughts about Tom, getting your attention to get going and get busy; there is one suggestion I have is to break up your fun visit with Tom, is to split it up into paragraphs.
Gert
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018
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Smiles Vance
I had fun reading about your thoughts about Tom, getting your attention to get going and get busy; there is one suggestion I have is to break up your fun visit with Tom, is to split it up into paragraphs.
Gert
Comment Written 09-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018
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Great idea and thanks Gert! I certainly have a habit of railing on and on without really considering how my "packaging" might or might not affect the readability. Thanks so much for bringing this to my attention! Vance
Comment from val fitchie
"sorry it doesn't rhyme" HAH!! That last one was for me, wasn't it? I have had the same malady with things getting in the way of my YA novel I'm writing; NON PRODUCTIVE things. Now I'm back on track because the ARTS are more important than any other stupidass souless activity and thought. DEDICATION and GRATITUDE(where have I heard that G word before?) Thank you for this writtenword kick in MY stupid ass. No offence to actual donkeys and mules is implied
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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"sorry it doesn't rhyme" HAH!! That last one was for me, wasn't it? I have had the same malady with things getting in the way of my YA novel I'm writing; NON PRODUCTIVE things. Now I'm back on track because the ARTS are more important than any other stupidass souless activity and thought. DEDICATION and GRATITUDE(where have I heard that G word before?) Thank you for this writtenword kick in MY stupid ass. No offence to actual donkeys and mules is implied
Comment Written 01-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Val, you are without a doubt, my most treasured friend in the world of inspiration energy as you keep my mind ticking with determination to do it better next time! Bless you forever! Vance
Comment from Spitfire
Thanks for putting out something lighthearted right now. It sure fits my situation. Always bills to be paid online, forms to fill out for medical visits, drinking glasses to watch, a husband who wants to know what I'm doing every ten seconds!
reply by the author on 30-May-2018
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Thanks for putting out something lighthearted right now. It sure fits my situation. Always bills to be paid online, forms to fill out for medical visits, drinking glasses to watch, a husband who wants to know what I'm doing every ten seconds!
Comment Written 29-May-2018
reply by the author on 30-May-2018
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Thanks so much dear one, for this lovely review and stars! So glad to know my work put some light in your heart right now as that is always my intention! Blessings and hugs! Love, Vance
Comment from giraffmang
hi there,
Well that's certainly a bit of a mouthful. it's true though that this site can suck you in all the time, even when there is seemingly nothing to do...lol
other things I cant even remember - can't.
NON_FANSTORIAL - NON-FANSTORIAL.
and don't forget who love's ya - loves.
I get the rant nature of this but be aware of your over-punctuation. lol
good one
reply by the author on 27-May-2018
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hi there,
Well that's certainly a bit of a mouthful. it's true though that this site can suck you in all the time, even when there is seemingly nothing to do...lol
other things I cant even remember - can't.
NON_FANSTORIAL - NON-FANSTORIAL.
and don't forget who love's ya - loves.
I get the rant nature of this but be aware of your over-punctuation. lol
good one
Comment Written 27-May-2018
reply by the author on 27-May-2018
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Thanks so much giraffmang for this truly delightful, amusing and fun-filled review! Please always stay close! Vance
Comment from apky
This made me start this morning with a smile, my friend.
Not really well acquainted with Tom but I believe he has helpers and herlpers' helpers too, to keep us all in line and shout about the boot being on the other foot when we go astray.
Thanks for posting the fun read.
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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This made me start this morning with a smile, my friend.
Not really well acquainted with Tom but I believe he has helpers and herlpers' helpers too, to keep us all in line and shout about the boot being on the other foot when we go astray.
Thanks for posting the fun read.
Comment Written 25-May-2018
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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Well, I will admit to this work being a bit abstract as, if it were true in all dimensions, I would have heard from TOM by now, but I don't think he spends a lot of time reading our posts but I do hope he someday catches this one. Thanks for your always great review and messages, please stay tuned! Vance
Comment from karenina
I don't know Tom but he HAS to have a sense of humor to deal with the many personalities, submissions, complaints and praises he must receive on a near daily basis. I checked...no new=fangled monitors on my LAPTOP----HOWEVER perhaps he has a hand in mind control somehow? It seems if I am away for more than three days I am mired in guilt and remorse and find I MUST sign in to at the very least review those I have fanned! I see him as some Oz like Muse behind the curtain...and thank goodness! Love this humorous offering...I can so relate!
Karenina
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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I don't know Tom but he HAS to have a sense of humor to deal with the many personalities, submissions, complaints and praises he must receive on a near daily basis. I checked...no new=fangled monitors on my LAPTOP----HOWEVER perhaps he has a hand in mind control somehow? It seems if I am away for more than three days I am mired in guilt and remorse and find I MUST sign in to at the very least review those I have fanned! I see him as some Oz like Muse behind the curtain...and thank goodness! Love this humorous offering...I can so relate!
Karenina
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thank you sincerely Karenina, for another wonderful and generous review and stars. I have not received any comments from TOM on this post but hope he enjoys it as it was a lot of fun....and glad you did too, so please stay tuned! Vance
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Does he review poems on site ever? He ought to answer his one! I hope he gets a great smile out of it!
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You never know with Tom anymore but years back he was more in the game! Vance
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I'm hoping....
Comment from redrocklover
This was so appropriate to all of us FanStorians who write, attempt to write or procrastinate about writing. It made me smile to see parts of myself within your script. Thanks for sharing with us. Linda (redrocklover)
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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This was so appropriate to all of us FanStorians who write, attempt to write or procrastinate about writing. It made me smile to see parts of myself within your script. Thanks for sharing with us. Linda (redrocklover)
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thank you so much Linda, for the lovely review and stars! I sometimes have these strange and off-the-wall urges to write something that reflects back upon all Fanstory friends and also tries to capture Tom Ens, into the crowd, but so far, he has not acknowledged reading or knowing about this one so the giggle is not confirmed but hopefully will give him a laugh! Thanks again and please stay tuned! Vance
Comment from Ginnygray
Vance, this is definitely a good write and you have a creative "bent" in the clever way you have addressed these descriptive tips to Tom. I liked the one about how can you write if you are reclaiming your sleep. There is so much work to do with tuning your guitar, puppy needs walking, and the garage is in need of new insulation. All of these things Tom would think are good material for writing. I'm with you on getting back to creationville and you are a great example to follow! Cheers to you and I'm looking forward to your pen and the upcoming new poems, scripts, and stories. I enjoyed this one.
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Vance, this is definitely a good write and you have a creative "bent" in the clever way you have addressed these descriptive tips to Tom. I liked the one about how can you write if you are reclaiming your sleep. There is so much work to do with tuning your guitar, puppy needs walking, and the garage is in need of new insulation. All of these things Tom would think are good material for writing. I'm with you on getting back to creationville and you are a great example to follow! Cheers to you and I'm looking forward to your pen and the upcoming new poems, scripts, and stories. I enjoyed this one.
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thank you so much Ginnygray, for another lovely review and generous stars! So glad you had some fun with this one and I shall do my best to keep you smiling! stay tuned!! Vance
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for this cheerful greeting, Vance. I think you are all urging us to write something? We have been writing. Do check out our profiles if you don't get notified.
One spag:
" and don't forget who love's " (loves)
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thanks for this cheerful greeting, Vance. I think you are all urging us to write something? We have been writing. Do check out our profiles if you don't get notified.
One spag:
" and don't forget who love's " (loves)
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thanks lyenochka, for another fun review and great stars! Glad you had some fun and hope you will stay tuned! Vance
Comment from royowen
Obviously your tiredness is doing to you what it does to me...we think it's a conspiracy to keep writing till we drop,. I'm decided currently if should continue with fanstory and start living. Hang on, this is trying to contribute to other's lives...isn't it! Well done Vance you've done a good job, blessings, my friend, Roy
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Obviously your tiredness is doing to you what it does to me...we think it's a conspiracy to keep writing till we drop,. I'm decided currently if should continue with fanstory and start living. Hang on, this is trying to contribute to other's lives...isn't it! Well done Vance you've done a good job, blessings, my friend, Roy
Comment Written 23-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thank you dear brother ROY! it's always a fresh breath of joy to hear from you in any dimension! please stay tuned! Vance
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Well done Vance
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Thanks so much Brother ! Bless you always, Vance
