FAMILY TIES.
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Comment from Debbie Pope
I love this. It should be called prick and treat. The doctor pricks the child to enable him to treat the illness. Then he treats him with another prick and probably a lollipop. This prick and treat theme of yours in simple, but ingenious. This is not a story for children, but an adult story written from a child's perspective. Hence the simple language, style, and definitions. You should keep with this child's perspective theme and do a host of treatises on life's problems. Thank you for this story. Very enjoyable.
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I love this. It should be called prick and treat. The doctor pricks the child to enable him to treat the illness. Then he treats him with another prick and probably a lollipop. This prick and treat theme of yours in simple, but ingenious. This is not a story for children, but an adult story written from a child's perspective. Hence the simple language, style, and definitions. You should keep with this child's perspective theme and do a host of treatises on life's problems. Thank you for this story. Very enjoyable.
Comment Written 23-May-2018
Comment from Old Soldier
A very good lesson for all. A long poem but a great short story. If you haven't you should try it. Writing for children is truly a gift from God. Thanks for sharing and keep writing and reading.
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A very good lesson for all. A long poem but a great short story. If you haven't you should try it. Writing for children is truly a gift from God. Thanks for sharing and keep writing and reading.
Comment Written 23-May-2018
