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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from frogbook
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Great way to give a bug a personality here, though these guys do seem to have expressions in their buggy little eyes. A funny one here!

 Comment Written 23-May-2018


reply by the author on 23-May-2018
    Thanks, FB
Comment from brenda faye curtis
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You've found some truly adorable pictures of these very expressive creatures. Doesn't he look like he's performing in a commercial, advertising Captain Morgan? His pose is perfect!
Love the poem you wrote to go with the picture. Another good one!

 Comment Written 23-May-2018


reply by the author on 23-May-2018
    Thanks, Brenda
reply by brenda faye curtis on 23-May-2018
    You're welcome, Bill!
Comment from damommy
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Chad's quite the handsome lad, and his sunburn is turning out well. He's proof that prayer works. 8-)


What a clever take on this photo. You did very well with it.

 Comment Written 22-May-2018


reply by the author on 22-May-2018
    Thanks, da
Comment from judiverse
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Nice rhyme with Chad and glad. He must be ready for spring break if he's been working on his tan. He's ready for the beach! Maybe he'll run into a lot of female female praying mantises ready to party. Oh, no, I remember what you wrote before. He'd better not go there. Clever presentation. judi

 Comment Written 22-May-2018


reply by the author on 22-May-2018
    Chad?s a bit vacuous so it?ll be slim pickings for the ladies.
reply by judiverse on 22-May-2018
    The praying mantises are so unpredictable. judi
Comment from nomi338
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Anytime you can get what you pray for, without it turning into something you have to pay for. You are miles ahead of the game of life. Far too many times, you get nothing in return and you have to live with the shame of that sunburn.

 Comment Written 22-May-2018


reply by the author on 22-May-2018
    The philosophy of tanning?
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
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lol, that's hilarious, Bill, heh-heh, the picture with your words gave me a good laugh, it matches really well. This is clever and humorous, you're so silly, lol ~Kerry

 Comment Written 22-May-2018


reply by the author on 22-May-2018
    Thanks, Kerry.
reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 24-May-2018
    You're welcome:)
Comment from Phillip C Kuhn
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Another good piece, now is chad the toasty mantis? Whenever I get sunburnt I look like a lobster, it's horrible, must be the Irish in me, good poem, fun read

 Comment Written 22-May-2018


reply by the author on 22-May-2018
    Thanks, Phillip. I always burn and it turns to a tan. I?m sure that?s not Chad?s case, but it seemed funny.
Comment from kiwijenny
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Ha ha ha you're preying on our sense of humor...love the green eyes. O is this the green eyed monster of insect land,,,is he jealous ?
Good poem and good artwork
Well penned
God bless

 Comment Written 22-May-2018


reply by the author on 22-May-2018
    Thank you, Jenny, for the nice review. Bill
Comment from aanneee
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That really is a terrific picture choice, made me chuckle, he looks like royalty almost with that pose of his. Words are the icing on this majesty's cake. Thank you so much for this early morning brightener...Dinah

 Comment Written 22-May-2018


reply by the author on 22-May-2018
    Thanks, Dinah
Comment from William Ross
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Lol, good fun and witty 5 7 5 on a sun burn turning tan, on this praying mantis. Thanks for sharing the wit and fun. have a great day.

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 Comment Written 22-May-2018


reply by the author on 22-May-2018
    Thanks, William