Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks how Robert celebrated his Father's Day gifting father a card naming Dad#1 as his mother baked cakes, father thanked him and hugged and said goodnight; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 21-May-2018

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reply by the author on 22-May-2018

Thank you:)

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I love the cool name..I like the way it trips off the tongue..
What could make this more memorable? What if something exciting happened.
Instead of the father telling Marcus he made the day memorable...show it with the fishing rod...actually fish and get the biggest one in the lake..
Just a thought
God bless

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 Comment Written 21-May-2018

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reply by the author on 22-May-2018

Well, Robert and his father already went camping and fishing at a lake... not sure which adventure that was. Thanks so much for reading.